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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which three you consider the most effective. Comic Books Radio Television Film Theater Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words. v.1

Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which three you consider the most effective. Comic Books Radio Television Film Theater v. 1
It is inevitable controversial and indisputable fact that technology has improved the way of communicating with the people. There are variety of ways to connect and provide information such as television, Radio, Films etc. Do you think these ways have completely positive effects on public? Well, let us look into it to get to a concrete decision. Firstly, the best possible means of communication would be through television in short T. V. Television has been raising the standards of communicating the information visually through the satellites and which helps us to get paramount every day updates on spot. Although we have many advantages, we do have many disadvantages too. One should consider what is good and what is bad and how to connect to positive. In addition, these LCD visual communication had addicting adolescents and have great effects on vision problems in future. For example- Parents have made toddlers addicted to TV to eat their food quickly, not realizing the affects in near future. Secondly, Radio and Films also have great impact of connecting with the public with enjoyment. There is a staggering amount in terms of Radio as many people not interested in listening rather watching. However, it provides extreme entertainment wherever we are. For instance- Employees do not have enough time to manage to watch television or to read newspaper, so they can adapt to Radio which serves them with all stuff while travelling to office. It has been proven viable. Films also made significant changes in adults lifestyles. In fact, many people enjoy movies as a part of their routine and usually in weekends. But films have reached their limit as exposing violent which results in bad behavior of young people. To conclude, I would definitely agree with aforementioned statements that there are many effective ways of communicating with the people whether it is good or bad, it depends on every individual to make up self-esteem and take in a positive note and see good in everything.
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improved
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way
of communicating with the
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people
. There are variety of
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ways
to connect and provide information such as
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television
,
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Radio
, Films etc. Do you
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think
these
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ways
have completely
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positive
effects on public? Well,
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let
us look into it to
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get
to a concrete decision.

Firstly
, the best possible means of communication would be through
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television
in short T. V.
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Television
has been raising the standards of communicating the information
visually
through the satellites and which
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helps
us to
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get
paramount every day updates on spot. Although we have
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many
advantages, we do have
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many
disadvantages too. One should consider what is
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good
and what is
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bad
and how to connect to
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positive
.
In addition
, these LCD visual communication had addicting adolescents and have great effects on vision problems
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in future
.
For example
- Parents have made toddlers addicted to TV to eat their food
quickly
, not realizing the affects in near future.

Secondly
,
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Radio
and Films
also
have great impact of connecting with the public with enjoyment. There is a staggering amount in terms of
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Radio
as
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many
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people
not interested in listening
rather
watching.
However
, it provides extreme entertainment wherever we are.
For instance
- Employees do not have
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enough
time to manage to
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watch
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television
or to read newspaper,
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so
they can adapt to
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Radio
which serves them with all stuff while travelling to office. It has
been proven
viable. Films
also
made significant
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changes
in adults lifestyles. In fact,
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many
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people
enjoy movies as a part of their routine and
usually
in weekends.
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But
films have reached their limit as exposing violent which results in
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bad
behavior of young
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people
.

To conclude
, I would definitely
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agree
with aforementioned statements that there are
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many
effective
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ways
of communicating with the
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people
whether it is
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good
or
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bad
, it depends on every individual to
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make
up self-esteem and take in a
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positive
note and
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see
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
in everything.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which three you consider the most effective. Comic Books Radio Television Film Theater v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
330 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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