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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective. • comics • books • radio • television • film • theater Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.11

Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective. • comics • books • radio • television • film • theater v. 11
In the recent few decades, communication media has changed a lot in spreading information across the world and most preponderant communication mediums are books, films, and television. In my view, there are both merits and demerits for these platforms and this essay will discuss both merits and demerits and state my opinion. Firstly, as we already know many films have drawn inspiration from books or novels and produce a film, which is telecasted in the television sets. In addition, we can see that the different medium comprehends each other and work hand in hand for transmitting information. For example, a recent survey informs that televisions have become essential need and people are eager to know activities across the globe. Needless to say, to have instant awareness multimedia play a key role in transmission of news. Secondly, there are some pitfalls that can overwhelm the potential benefits of communication media. When it comes to books, we know that it is time consuming and passing information to one and another is time consuming; however, films and television production values have increased and to cope with such increases more commercials are required. Furthermore, the gain instant popularity and rating channels are spreading bad news compared to social welfare news. Hence, money minded satellite channels and films can make the watching experience worse. In conclusion, as discussed, we can understand that multimedia are time consuming, yet many people show interest in to gain a firm grip on current affairs, watch movies, and read books to enhance their knowledge.
In the recent few decades, communication media has
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changed
a lot in spreading information across the world and most preponderant communication mediums are
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books
, films, and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
. In my view, there are both merits and demerits for these platforms and this essay will discuss both merits and demerits and state my opinion.

Firstly
, as we already know
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many
films have drawn inspiration from
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books
or novels and produce a film, which is
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telecasted
in the
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television
sets.
In addition
, we can
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see
that the
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different
medium comprehends each other and work hand in hand for transmitting information.
For example
, a recent survey informs that
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televisions
have become essential need and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are eager to know activities across the globe. Needless to say, to have instant awareness multimedia play a key role in transmission of news.

Secondly
, there are
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some
pitfalls that can overwhelm the potential benefits of communication media. When it
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comes
to
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books
, we know that it is
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time consuming
and passing information to one and another is
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time consuming
;
however
, films and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
production values have increased and to cope with such increases more commercials
are required
.
Furthermore
, the gain instant popularity and rating channels are spreading
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
news compared to social welfare news.
Hence
, money minded satellite channels and films can
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make
the watching experience worse.

In conclusion
, as discussed, we can understand that multimedia are
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time consuming
,
yet
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many
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people
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show
interest in to gain a firm grip on
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current
affairs,
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watch
movies, and read
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
to enhance their knowledge.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective. • comics • books • radio • television • film • theater v. 11

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
254 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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