It is often argued that learning with teachers have more benefits that self-studying from sources like the internet or TV. I partly agree with this opinion and I believe that self-learning is also important as much as learning at school or university.
The main advantage of learning by yourself is the opportunity to learn whatever you want regardless of your age. The internet is full of online content such as courses, tutorials, articles and many people of different ages learn from that in order to shift the occupation or extend their knowledge.
And you get much more information on the online than at school or university. According to the statistics, more and more students opt to study online and I think this trend will be increasing in next years.
Nevertheless, students at schools and universities can get a social contact with other people. In other words, students learn how to interact with tutors and other students. They become more social and interactive people and this is the major drawback of learning from the internet. For example, workers that have got through the universities are more competitive on the market than the employees who did not have such experience with learning at universities.
To conclude, although I agree that schools are the important part of our career or study and we can learn a lot from there, I believe that online education should also be mentioned because it plays a significant role in the modern society and it might replace the current teaching system.
It is
often
argued that
learning
with teachers have more benefits that self-studying from sources like the internet or TV. I partly
agree
with this opinion and I believe that self-learning is
also
important
as much as
learning
at
school
or university.
The main advantage of
learning
by yourself is the opportunity to
learn
whatever you want regardless of your age. The internet is full of
online
content such as courses, tutorials, articles and
many
people
of
different
ages
learn
from that in order to shift the occupation or extend their knowledge.
And you
get
much more information on the
online
than at
school
or university. According to the statistics, more and more
students
opt to study
online
and I
think
this trend will be increasing in
next
years.
Nevertheless
,
students
at
schools
and universities can
get
a social contact with other
people
.
In other words
,
students
learn
how to interact with tutors and other
students
. They become more social and interactive
people
and this is the major drawback of
learning
from the internet.
For example
, workers that have
got
through the universities are more competitive on the market than the employees who did not have such experience with
learning
at universities.
To conclude
, although I
agree
that
schools
are the
important
part of our career or
study and
we can
learn
a lot from there, I believe that
online
education should
also
be mentioned
because
it plays a significant role in the modern society and it might replace the
current
teaching system.
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