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A hundred years ago people thought that the human race was steadily improving in every area of life Now it seems this is not certain that situation In which area do you think we have made important progress nowadays In which areas do you think we still ne v.1

A hundred years ago people thought that the human race was steadily improving in every area of life Now it seems this is not certain that situation In which area do you think we have made important progress nowadays In which areas do you think we still ne v. 1
It is a fact that aeroplane plays a very important role in individuals' lives that is why nowadays most of the people are travelling through planes after getting a discount on air tickets and everyone is taking the benefits of aeroplane. However, there is an argument in the society that aeroplanes create a lot of pollution in the environment which is not good for our atmosphere. So that others think that cheap air flight should be banned. Hereby, I am going to shed light on both views in the ensuing paragraphs. On the face of the above statement, there are multiple factors to support why discounted air flight tickets give more freedom. The first and foremost factor is humans can save a lot of time. Despite knowing this fact that "time and tides wait for none" and they can utilise that time for learning purpose. What is more, discounted tickets work like a "hand and gloves" for air travel companies and customers, this is to say that individuals' can save a lot of money as well as air companies also getting benefits for their staff members. To support my claim I can quote an example of Air India and other international plane companies are providing economy class for all types of people. On the contrary, there is one school of thought that air travel activities are "springing up like mushrooms" and there is no doubt if these activities go continuously like this then humans have to face a lot of bad consequences. One of the main problems is the extinction of crude oil and other fuels. Furthermore, these fuel create a lot of pollution in the atmosphere. Besides this, aeroplane creates a lot of noise pollution. Not on this, these planes emit harmful radiations which are used in diverging the bird's direction from their path. Owing to this, cheap tickets should be banned so that we can save our mother nature. To exemplify this in a recent survey researcher has revealed that developed and developing countries have banned cheap tickets, but still humans get discount on air tickets under certain conditions. To put it in a nutshell, both the aspects have their own advantages, but no one can abnegate the importance of discounted air tickets for humans. As such, it is indeed true that aeroplane is not the only one source which create pollution there are many more. Hence, some issues or problems can be resolved by improving technology and other methods.
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plays a
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important
role in individuals'
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lives
that is
why nowadays most of the
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people
are travelling through
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planes
after getting a discount on
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air
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tickets
and everyone is taking the benefits of
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aeroplane
.
However
, there is an argument in the society that
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aeroplanes
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create
a
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lot
of
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pollution
in the environment which is not
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good
for our atmosphere.
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So that
others
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think
that
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cheap
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air
flight should
be banned
. Hereby, I am going to shed light on both views in the ensuing paragraphs.

On the face of the above statement, there are multiple factors to support why discounted
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air
flight
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tickets
give more freedom. The
first
and foremost factor is
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humans
can save a
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lot
of time. Despite knowing this fact that
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"
time and tides wait for none
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"
and they can
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utilise
that time for learning purpose.
What is more
, discounted
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tickets
work like a
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"
hand and gloves
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"
for
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air
travel
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companies
and customers, this is to say that individuals' can save a
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lot
of money
as well
as
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air
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companies
also
getting benefits for their staff members. To support my claim I can quote an example of
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Air
India and
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other
international
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plane
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companies
are providing economy
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class
for all types of
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people
.

On the contrary
, there is one school of
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thought
that
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air
travel activities are
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"
springing up like mushrooms
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"
and there is no doubt if these activities go
continuously
like this then
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humans
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have to
face a
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lot
of
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bad
consequences. One of the main problems is the extinction of crude oil and
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other
fuels.
Furthermore
, these fuel
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create
a
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lot
of
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pollution
in the atmosphere.
Besides
this,
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aeroplane
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creates
a
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lot
of noise
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pollution
. Not on this, these
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planes
emit harmful radiations which are
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used
in diverging the bird's direction from their path. Owing to this,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cheap
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tickets
should
be banned
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so
that we can save our mother nature. To exemplify this in a recent survey researcher has revealed that developed and
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developing countries
have banned
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cheap
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tickets
,
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but
still
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humans
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get
discount on
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air
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tickets
under certain conditions.

To put it in a nutshell, both the aspects have their
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own
advantages,
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but
no one can abnegate the importance of discounted
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air
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tickets
for
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humans
. As such, it is
indeed
true that
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aeroplane
is not the
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only
one source which
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create
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pollution
there are
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many
more.
Hence
,
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some
issues or problems can
be resolved
by improving technology and
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other
methods.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay A hundred years ago people thought that the human race was steadily improving in every area of life Now it seems this is not certain that situation In which area do you think we have made important progress nowadays In which areas do you think we still ne v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
412 words
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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
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  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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