Some people think that parents should not give their children expensive presents Do you agree or disagree with this statement Give your opinion and examples based on you own experience v.1
Some people think that parents should not give their children expensive presents Give your opinion and examples based on you own experience v. 1
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter regarding my review for a trip to Agra, India, on the 20th of April 2020, which was managed by your company.
The tour was about the Jewels of India. Moreover, it was a two day trip to Agra which included accommodation and visiting several tourist sites in the city, one of the sites was the Taj Mahal and the Red Fort which were marvellous. Later on, we were taken to the most high-spirited areas in Delhi, for instance, Connaught street, which is in the heart of the city and is notable for food and shopping. Additionally, there was a tour-bus as well, which took us around the city.
The sole reason for this trip to be memorable was because of our guide. He was knowledgeable and patient throughout the journey. Furthermore, he was nonchalant in answering our numerous questions. Nevertheless, he also shared stories about various rulers inhabitable in the region. In addition to this, he also suggested some scrumptious food items as well as some traditional clothing stores. Overall the tour was indelible because of him.
In my opinion, that individual desires some extra credit for his hard work and dedication. If I may, I would like to give some suggestions to appreciate his efforts, for example, adding an option of tipping the tour guide in the total cost. All in all, I would recommend your company, especially the chaperon as well to my friends and families.
Thanking you.
Yours sincerely,
Shakib Qureshi
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter regarding my review for a trip to Agra, India, on the 20th of April 2020, which
was managed
by your
company
.
The tour was about the Jewels of India.
Moreover
, it was a
two day
trip to Agra which included accommodation and visiting several tourist sites in the city, one of the sites was the Taj Mahal and the Red Fort which were
marvellous
. Later on, we
were taken
to the most high-spirited areas in Delhi,
for instance
,
Connaught
street, which is in the heart of the city and is notable for food and shopping.
Additionally
, there was a tour-bus
as well
, which took us around the city.
The sole reason for this trip to be memorable was
because
of our guide. He was knowledgeable and patient throughout the journey.
Furthermore
, he was nonchalant in answering our numerous questions.
Nevertheless
, he
also
shared stories about various rulers inhabitable in the region.
In addition
to this, he
also
suggested
some
scrumptious food items
as well
as
some
traditional clothing stores.
Overall
the tour was indelible
because
of him.
In my opinion, that individual desires
some
extra credit for his
hard
work and dedication. If I may, I would like to give
some
suggestions to appreciate his efforts,
for example
, adding an option of tipping the tour guide in the total cost. All in all, I would recommend your
company
,
especially
the chaperon
as well
to my friends and families.
Thanking you.
Yours
sincerely
,
Shakib
Qureshi
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