Children's education is expensive. In some countries, the government pays some or all of the costs. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages? v.7
Children's education is expensive. In some countries, the government pays some or all of the costs. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages? v. 7
People are now able to travel for a long distance away from their home using public and private transport. The merits of transportations are employees can reach to their companies timely and cheaply. While if we talk about its drawbacks, it is creating pollution in the environment, its maintenance cost is very high.
Firstly, earlier, it was quite difficult to reach at the company by an employee so, he used to work nearby his house. However, today with the advent of new technology and the development of public transports like metros, buses, it is really easy to reach in time. Also, it is quite affordable to buy a ticket for a bus and train. So, I would say transportation has made our life flexible in terms of travelling.
Despite all these, there are some demerits which are affecting our daily life. Today, vehicles are run by fossil fuels, which emit harmful greenhouse gases, which are changing the climate condition of our earth. For example, global warming is occurring. In addition to that, transportation maintenance cost is very expensive. Every week, it requires a service. In case of public transport the government has to take care of all the expenses, while in case of private transport, owner of the vehicle has to look after all the costs it require to keep maintain his vehicle.
In conclusion, although there are several benefits of transportation around us, their disadvantages are also not less. Hence, transportations are providing luxury to travel cheaply and timely, but it is also affecting the environment differently.
People
are
now
able to travel for a long distance away from their home using public and private
transport
. The merits of
transportations
are employees can reach to their
companies
timely and
cheaply
. While if we talk about its drawbacks, it is creating pollution in the environment, its maintenance cost is
very
high.
Firstly
, earlier, it was quite difficult to reach at the
company
by an employee
so
, he
used
to work nearby his
house
.
However
,
today
with the advent of new technology and the development of public
transports
like metros, buses, it is
really
easy to reach in time.
Also
, it is quite affordable to
buy
a ticket for a bus and train.
So
, I would say
transportation
has made our life flexible in terms of travelling.
Despite all these, there are
some
demerits which are affecting our daily life.
Today
, vehicles
are run
by fossil fuels, which emit harmful greenhouse gases, which are changing the climate condition of our earth.
For example
, global warming is occurring.
In addition
to that,
transportation
maintenance cost is
very
expensive. Every week, it requires a service. In case of public
transport
the
government
has to
take care of all the expenses, while in case of private
transport
, owner of the vehicle
has to
look
after all
the costs it
require
to
keep
maintain his vehicle.
In conclusion
, although there are several benefits of
transportation
around us, their disadvantages are
also
not less.
Hence
,
transportations
are providing luxury to travel
cheaply
and timely,
but
it is
also
affecting the environment
differently
.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes