This essay talks about why animals should be employed to satisfy our needs and also why they should not be exploited and be treated as humans.
Animals should be employed by humans because, they provide food. If everyone was eating vegetables, then there would be scarce food resources, but animals help to maintain the balance. The animals also provide great help in research. We can study animals and they can tell us more about our past since some of them are known to live longer than the history of humankind. Similarly, they can also be helpful to provide medication. For example, researching on why mosquitoes do not transmit HIV AIDs even if they take blood from an HIV positive person can lead cure for HIV and how we can stop it from spreading.
On the other hand, animals should also be treated as humans since they are seen to have developed emotions towards humans and for some people, their pets are their best friend who helps them relax and reduce loneliness which makes a person mentally healthy. Some animals are even smarter than us and can carry out tasks that a normal human cannot. This tells us that animals are not so different from humans.
In conclusion, I believe that animals should be employed by humans but only for the purpose of providing food and helping in research and yet they have to be handled with the same care that a human would receive if he/she was to be researched on.
This essay talks about why
animals
should
be employed
to satisfy our needs and
also
why they should not
be exploited
and
be treated
as humans.
Animals should
be employed
by
humans
because
, they provide food. If everyone was eating vegetables, then there would be scarce food resources,
but
animals
help
to maintain the balance. The
animals
also
provide great
help
in research. We can study
animals and
they can
tell
us more about our past since
some
of them
are known
to
live
longer than the history of humankind.
Similarly
, they can
also
be helpful to provide medication.
For example
, researching on why mosquitoes do not transmit HIV
AIDs even
if they take blood from an HIV
positive
person can lead cure for HIV and how we can
stop
it from spreading.
On the other hand
,
animals
should
also
be treated
as
humans
since they are
seen
to have developed emotions towards
humans
and for
some
people
, their pets are their best friend who
helps
them relax and
reduce
loneliness which
makes
a person mentally healthy.
Some
animals
are even smarter than us and can carry out tasks that a normal
human
cannot. This
tells
us that
animals
are not
so
different
from humans.
In conclusion
, I believe that
animals
should
be employed
by
humans
but
only
for the purpose of providing food and helping in
research and
yet
they
have to
be handled
with the same care that a
human
would receive if he/she was to
be researched
on.
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