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Children who start reading earlier in life, perform better later on in their school studies. How important are early reading skills in a Child's academic performance. What other pre-school factors influence a child's later academic achievements. v.1

Children who start reading earlier in life, perform better later on in their school studies. How important are early reading skills in a Child's academic performance. What other pre-school factors influence a child's later academic achievements. v. 1
From the ancient period reading skill is considered as a rudimentary knowledge for everyone even in children. So, in the early stage of children's reading habit, build a better performance in their school studies. It is agreed that reading skills are important for a child's academic performance. This essay will discuss how these skills will improve their quality of study and also consider other pre-school factors influence a toddler's later academic achievement Firstly, we should introduce our baby with a short story which enclosed with pictures and colouring pencils may captivated by them. In this way, we can improve their reading habit. For instance, it is commonly accepted that at the age of three, our offspring shows some curiosity towards colour pencils, books, pen etc. In pre-schools the tutor train their students to deal with books which also contain short stories. As a result of this, they can get a great knowledge in that language and it will be beneficial for their future. Secondly, there are so many pre-school factors will boost their learning ability. Today's pre-school coaching entirely differs from the past. A case study conducted by the state educational department revealed that, many of the pre-schools are modernized and now they use the latest version of syllabus. Moreover, they use a special play section that improves their thinking level, such as puzzle mat, story telling, building blocks etc. Accordingly, these extra activities influence a preschoolers's academic building ability. Moreover, these extras make a child's progression into an adult. To summarise, the early stage reading custom is an important factor in a child's growth. In order to improve the reading skills we must introduce the world of library into his life. In his way, the kids may impress by books which contain lots of stories. As a result of all these, a kid will grow faster in mentally.
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a rudimentary knowledge
for everyone even in children.
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reading
habit, build a better performance in their school studies. It is
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that
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reading
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skills
are
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important
for a child's academic performance. This essay will discuss how these
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skills
will
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improve
their quality of study and
also
consider other
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pre-school
factors influence a toddler's later academic
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achievement


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, we should introduce our baby with a short
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story
which enclosed with pictures and
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colouring
pencils may captivated by them. In this way, we can
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improve
their
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reading
habit.
For instance
, it is
commonly
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accepted
that at the age of three, our offspring
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shows
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some
curiosity towards
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colour
pencils, books, pen etc. In
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pre-schools
the tutor train their students to deal with books which
also
contain short
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stories
.
As a result
of this, they can
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get
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a great knowledge
in that language and it will be beneficial for their future.

Secondly
, there are
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so
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many
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pre-school
factors will boost their learning ability.
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Today
's
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pre-school
coaching
entirely
differs from the past. A case study conducted by the state educational department revealed that,
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many
of the
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pre-schools
are modernized
and
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now
they
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use
the latest version of syllabus.
Moreover
, they
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use
a special play section that
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improves
their thinking level, such as puzzle mat,
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story
telling, building blocks etc.
Accordingly
, these extra activities influence a
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preschoolers's
academic building ability.
Moreover
, these extras
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make
a child's progression into an adult.

To
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summarise
, the early stage
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reading
custom is an
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important
factor in a child's growth. In order to
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improve
the
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reading
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skills
we
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must
introduce the world of library into his life. In his way, the kids may impress by books which contain lots of
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stories
.
As a result
of all these, a kid will grow faster in mentally.
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IELTS essay Children who start reading earlier in life, perform better later on in their school studies. How important are early reading skills in a Child's academic performance. What other pre-school factors influence a child's later academic achievements. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
309 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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