Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children grow up with wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree whit this option? v.2
Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children grow up with wealthy parents. whit this option? v. 2
A child that lives his youth in a poor family can better face the obstacles of adult life than a child raised up in a rich family contest. In my opinion, this is not completely true, since I believe that the ability to manage problems depends not only on the economic status of the family during the childhood, but more on the family support.
Surely childhood is one of the most important periods of life. It is in these years that the child starts to give a shape to his world. He goes to school, he learns things, he understands the dynamics of staying together. Living into the richness could lead the baby to a wrong vision of the rules that menage the world. Something that is not possible to happen to someone brought up in a poor contest, in fact, there the reality of facts is something that cannot be hidden.
Therefore, I am convinced that the family, precisely the parents, plays a fundamental role in the growth of the child and in his future behaviour. Since the child is used to copy the actions of the older people around him, the way his mum and dad act will be important to define his future attitude. Even if the family is rich, but the parents understand how to train their kid, he will have the same ability to deal with the unknown facts of adult life as a poor child.
In conclusion, the important thing, to be able not to give up in adult life, is not about the money the family has, but the way the family stands by the child during his first stage of life.
A
child
that
lives
his youth in a poor
family
can better face the obstacles of adult
life
than a
child
raised up in a rich
family
contest. In my opinion, this is not completely true, since I believe that the ability to manage problems depends not
only
on the economic status of the
family
during the childhood,
but
more on the
family
support.
Surely
childhood is one of the most
important
periods of
life
. It is in these years that the
child
starts
to give a shape to his world. He goes to school, he learns things, he understands the dynamics of staying together. Living into the richness could lead the baby to a
wrong
vision of the
rules
that
menage
the world. Something
that is
not possible to happen to someone brought up in a poor contest, in fact, there the reality of facts is something that cannot
be hidden
.
Therefore
, I
am convinced
that the
family
,
precisely
the parents, plays a fundamental role in the growth of the
child
and in his future
behaviour
. Since the
child
is
used
to copy the actions of the older
people
around him, the way his mum and dad act will be
important
to define his future attitude. Even if the
family
is rich,
but
the parents understand how to train their kid, he will have the same ability to deal with the unknown facts of adult
life
as a poor child.
In conclusion
, the
important
thing, to be able not to give up in adult
life
, is not about the money the
family
has,
but
the way the
family
stands by the
child
during his
first
stage of
life
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes