One of the most controversial issues relates to that, nowdays; children are facing pressure from different prospectives. Through this essay, I will examine the possible reasons for this trend and suggest some practical reasons that an individual could implement to reduce pressure among children.
At first, young children are the new generation of our nation, and if they will be under pressure or stress that will be an issue. Similarly, there are parents who expect alot from their children and want their child to adopt field which they expect but, unfortunately sometimes this social pressure from there parents and there expectations gives negative affect on a child. However, children start thinking that they are not capable of fulfilling expectations of their parents, and due to this they lose their confidence level. This phenomenon can be solved by giving counciling to parents and by telling to give freedom to their child for choosing their own field so the pressure among the children would be reduced.
Moving ahead, children are also facing problems in other prospective such as commercial and academic which makes them weak and stressful from inside. The term peer pressure has a great effect on a child. In fact, it has been seen that children are affected more by the remarks of others rather than their own which they get in school. Moreover, there stress level incline when they think about the competition they are going to face after completing their studies and due this they make their academic progress awful. However, children should be given guidance and counciling that they can know that being average is also fine.
All in all, there are variety of different factors that have led to make the problem worse while, to conclude, I would like to say that proper counciling should be given to both parents and children for a great future generation.
One of the most controversial issues relates to that,
nowdays
;
children
are facing
pressure
from
different
prospectives
. Through this essay, I will examine the possible reasons for this trend and suggest
some
practical reasons that an individual could implement to
reduce
pressure
among children.
At
first
, young
children
are the new generation of our nation, and if they will be under
pressure
or
stress
that will be an issue.
Similarly
, there are
parents
who
expect
alot
from their
children
and want their
child
to adopt field which they
expect
but
, unfortunately
sometimes
this social
pressure
from there
parents
and there expectations gives
negative
affect
on a
child
.
However
,
children
start
thinking that they are not capable of fulfilling expectations of their
parents
, and due to this they lose their confidence level. This phenomenon can
be solved
by giving
counciling
to
parents
and by telling to give freedom to their
child
for choosing their
own
field
so
the
pressure
among the
children
would be
reduced
.
Moving ahead,
children
are
also
facing problems in other prospective such as commercial and academic which
makes
them weak and stressful from inside. The term peer
pressure
has a great effect on a
child
. In fact, it has been
seen
that
children
are
affected
more by the remarks of others
rather
than their
own
which they
get
in school.
Moreover
, there
stress
level incline when they
think
about the competition they are going to face after completing their studies and
due this
they
make
their academic progress awful.
However
,
children
should be
given
guidance and
counciling
that they can know that being average is
also
fine.
All in all, there are variety of
different
factors that have led to
make
the problem worse while,
to conclude
, I would like to say that proper
counciling
should be
given
to both
parents
and
children
for a great future generation.
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