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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the last past thirty years that many cities in the world are now on big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars. v.2

At a moment, many citizens around the world are using cars to travel from one place to another. As a result traffic-jams around the globe are taking place. This has happened because of more people are doing jobs in their area. But to reduce the usage of cars government can manage themself to organize different Ted talks or public talks which could eventually, solve the problem. Indeed, As according to the time increasing number of people are are owning there personal cars to travel to there destinations. This is happening because of high employment opportunities that are offered to citizens. however, roads are being jam-packed due to more traffic which is occurring on the roads each and everyday. so, to prove the above statement recently, it was demonstrated in a YouTube video which statically shown that From the year, 2010 to 2018 there was a sudden spike of cars which were sold to general people. Although, government can take various steps to demotivate people to stop the usage of cars. As from many steps there is one important measure that can have a huge effect on cars industries, which will only happen by organising free seminars by companies among individuals. government officials can give lot of reasons to discourage the citizens. As it was mentioned in an article, there was a data which told that in the USA in the year 2012, people were using motorbikes too much due to which the law department of usa organized many seminars to give a brief information about the usage of personal motorcycles. After which the overall result was helpful. In conclusion, it can be said that people have variety of reasons to use their own vehicle which always results in traffic- jams. However, government should implement new policies or they should take any possible measure which can help in reduction of vehicles.
At a moment,
many
citizens around the world are using
cars
to travel from one place to another.
As
a result traffic-jams around the globe are taking place. This has happened
because
of more
people
are doing jobs in their area.
But
to
reduce
the usage of
cars
government
can manage
themself
to organize
different
Ted talks or public talks which could
eventually
, solve the problem.

Indeed
, As according to the time increasing number of
people
are
are owning
there personal
cars
to travel to
there
destinations. This is happening
because
of high employment opportunities that
are offered
to citizens.
however
, roads are being jam-packed due to more traffic which is occurring on the roads each and
everyday
.
so
, to prove the above statement recently, it
was demonstrated
in a YouTube video which
statically
shown that

From the year, 2010 to 2018 there was a sudden spike of
cars
which
were sold
to general
people
.

Although
,
government
can take various steps to demotivate
people
to
stop
the usage of
cars
. As from
many
steps there is one
important
measure that can have a huge effect on
cars
industries, which will
only
happen by
organising
free seminars by
companies
among individuals.
government
officials can give
lot of
reasons to discourage the citizens. As it
was mentioned
in an article, there was a data which
told
that in the USA in the year 2012,
people
were using motorbikes too much due to which the law department of
usa
organized
many
seminars to give a brief information about the usage of personal motorcycles.
After
which the
overall
result was helpful.

In conclusion
, it can
be said
that
people
have
variety of
reasons to
use
their
own
vehicle which always results in traffic- jams.
However
,
government
should implement new
policies or
they should take any possible measure which can
help
in reduction of vehicles.
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IELTS essay Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars?

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