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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? v.35

Online shopping is one the captivating topic's in the world. now-a-days people tend to change their lifestyle, tastes and preferences and also they wish to save more time. Online shopping clearly eliminates the commuting time of a person and also doesn't bother us to stand in long queue or just discover a limited market. Online shopping is extending in each field and it carries a lot more advantages along with it like it gives access to a greater market. one can do shopping at any time of the day. the websites run 24 hours which is more effective for the consumers. Time is a crucial factor these days for each one of us, online shopping helps us to explore the entire market just on our hands. There are flexible return and exchange policies of the companies which helps to return a defective product easily. Cash-less is another goal which a country like india aims to achieve online shopping promotes making payments via electronic media. There is no perfect thing on this earth, so even the online shopping have some disadvantages like one can't touch the product. Sometimes, there is a delay in the delivery which makes the customer wait for a long time and it exceeds the time of occasio for which the custormer ordered the product. Counting on the pros and cons of online shopping we can say that it's pros are exceeding well than the cons. If we talk about coronavirus times then only online shopping was the source from where the customers could fulfill there basic needs like groceries and other necessities of the house. in conclusion to the above online shopping is a platform for the the money makers and money spenders. hence it has been growing enourmously on both sides of the coin.
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people
tend to
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change
their lifestyle, tastes and preferences and
also
they wish to save more
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time
.
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Online
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shopping
clearly
eliminates the commuting
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time
of a person and
also
doesn't bother us to stand in long queue or
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just
discover a limited market.

Online
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shopping
is extending in each field and it carries a lot more advantages along with it like it gives access to a greater market. one can do
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shopping
at any
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time
of the day. the websites run 24 hours which is more effective for the consumers.
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Time
is a crucial factor these days for each one of us,
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online
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shopping
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helps
us to explore the entire market
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just
on our hands. There are flexible return and exchange policies of the
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companies
which
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helps
to return a defective product
easily
. Cash-less is another goal which a country like india aims to achieve
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online
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shopping
promotes making payments via electronic media.

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even the
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disadvantages like one can't touch the product.
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, there is a delay in the delivery which
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makes
the customer wait for a long
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and it exceeds the
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of occasio for which the custormer ordered the product.

Counting on the pros and cons of
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online
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shopping
we can say that it's pros are exceeding well than the cons.

If we talk about coronavirus
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then
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was the source from where the customers could fulfill there basic needs like groceries and other necessities of the
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in conclusion
to the above
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online
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shopping
is a platform for the the money makers and money spenders.
hence
it has been growing
enourmously
on both sides of the coin.
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IELTS essay Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

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6 paragraphs
298 words
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