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It is commonly believed that in order to secure the roads, the great way is to lessen the speed limits. In my opinion, although speed restrictions do play an important role, there are other detrimental factors contributing to road safety as well. While it is important to have restricted speed limits, there are other important measures that could be put in place to avoid fatal accidents. Road safety improvement plans act as a crucial part in government policies and procedures. In other words, public awareness, frequent license checks contributes significantly towards secure roads. It is important for people to be aware of rules and regulations while driving on roads. This awareness can be given to individuals in the form of brochures or advertisements which will help them drive carefully. Furthermore, it is crucial on the government to have frequent license checks to ensure that only people with valid license are driving on the roads and are aware of rules and regulations. On the other hand, there are merits and demerits associated with reduced speed limits. One obvious advantage is to avoid fatal accidents which results in loss of human life leaving families in shock. For example, it was reported by roads and transport authority in the UAE that reducing the speed from 120km/hour to 100km/hour reduced the accidents by 30% in one year. The adverse effects of reducing speed on roads results in traffic congestion in cities, making it difficult for ambulances and people to reach hospital in emergency situations. To conclude, there are numerous way which can be opted to ensure road safety. While government plays an important part to provide constant checks, it is important for us to play our part to provide a safe road environment.
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commonly
believed that in order to secure the
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roads
, the great way is to lessen the
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speed
limits. In my opinion, although
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speed
restrictions do play an
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important
role, there are
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other
detrimental factors contributing to
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road
safety
as well
.

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important
to have restricted
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speed
limits, there are
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other
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important
measures that could
be put
in place to avoid fatal accidents.
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safety improvement plans act as a crucial part in
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government
policies and procedures. In
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other
words, public awareness, frequent license
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checks
contributes
significantly
towards secure
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roads
. It is
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important
for
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people
to be aware of
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rules
and regulations while driving on
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roads
. This awareness can be
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given
to individuals in the form of brochures or advertisements which will
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help
them drive
carefully
.
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, it is crucial on the
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government
to have frequent license
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checks
to ensure that
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only
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people
with valid license are driving on the
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roads
and are aware of
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rules
and regulations.

On the
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hand, there are merits and demerits associated with
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reduced
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speed
limits. One obvious advantage is to avoid fatal accidents which results in loss of human life leaving families in shock.
For example
, it
was reported
by
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roads
and transport authority in the UAE that reducing the
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speed
from
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120km
/hour to
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100km
/hour
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reduced
the accidents by 30% in one year. The adverse effects of reducing
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speed
on
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roads
results in traffic congestion in cities, making it difficult for ambulances and
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people
to reach hospital in emergency situations.

To conclude
, there are
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numerous
way which can
be opted
to ensure
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road
safety. While
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government
plays an
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important
part to provide constant
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checks
, it is
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important
for us to play our part to provide a safe
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road
environment.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay blob: https: //web. whatsapp. com/e59405e1-8f8e-437a-a69a-ed50f30d0337The charts below show household spending patterns in two countries between 1980 and 2008. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
289 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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