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Being able to speak a foreign language is an advantage these days. Some people think that children should start learning a foreign language at primary school, while others think children should begin in secondary school. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. v.2

Being able to speak a foreign language is an advantage these days. Some people think that children should start learning a foreign language at primary school, while others think children should begin in secondary school. v. 2
It is known that speaking another language in this highly competitive ecosystem could be considered as a plus among other professionals. Without any doubt all the efforts that can be done during the child's education process will pay back in their labour future. In my opinion, as sooner they begin the better. Hence, this essay will evidence the clear benefits of learning earlier, which will empower them with tools to face today's world demands. Nowadays, the labour market request certain skills in order to fill the talent gap, thus, without such abilities, professionals would struggle to achieve their goals. As this and in a hyperconnected world, speaking another language adds several points for any recruiter. For example, free, open trades among countries need talents who are capable of communicating with their peers, clients or leaders in order to achieve their goals. Overall, this is all matter of inclusion and competitiveness. On the other hand, while some think that by having only two foregin speaking abilities are more than ready to go to market, they might be wrong. During the last quarter of 2018 a research conducted by the British Council found that 89% of students are seeking to speak not only two, but at least three different languages to increase their chances of having their dream job. And, even though many years ago such performance was considered extraordinary, now it would be a new market standard. Such objective will not be achievable if children start their learning process as late as secondary school. To conclude and in my opinion, parents should consider proficiency education institutions which will result in bringing new opportunities to all early-stage learners where they should kick-start their preparation to be a fluent and multi-language speakers around the world.
It
is known
that speaking another language in this
highly
competitive ecosystem could
be considered
as a plus among other professionals. Without any doubt all the efforts that can
be done
during the child's education process will pay back in their
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labour
future. In my opinion, as sooner they
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begin
the better.
Hence
, this essay will evidence the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
benefits of learning earlier, which will empower them with tools to face
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today
's world demands.

Nowadays, the
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labour
market request certain
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skills
in order to fill the talent gap,
thus
, without such abilities, professionals would struggle to achieve their goals. As this and in a
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hyperconnected
world, speaking another language
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adds
several points for any recruiter.
For example
, free, open trades among countries need talents who are capable of communicating with their peers, clients or leaders in order to achieve their goals.
Overall
, this is all matter of inclusion and competitiveness.

On the other hand
, while
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some
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think
that by having
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only
two
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foregin
speaking abilities are more than ready to go to market, they might be
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wrong
. During the last quarter of 2018
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a research
conducted by the British Council found that 89% of students are seeking to speak not
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only
two,
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but
at least three
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different
languages to increase their chances of having their dream job. And,
even though
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many
years ago such performance
was considered
extraordinary,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
it would be a new market standard. Such objective will not be achievable if children
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
their learning process as late as secondary school.

To conclude
and in my opinion, parents should consider proficiency education institutions which will result in bringing new opportunities to all early-stage learners where they should kick-
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
their preparation to be a fluent and multi-language speakers around the world.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Being able to speak a foreign language is an advantage these days. Some people think that children should start learning a foreign language at primary school, while others think children should begin in secondary school. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
292 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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