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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think is a positive or negative development. v.13

Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think is a positive or negative development. v. 13
Having the variety of materials of similar types from any nation of the world has become convenient. Gone those days, when a special country used to have domain on any products as a speciality. This essay will contemplate on this phenomenon as an advantage. Globalisation has changed the way of doing trade, and this is due to increased imports as well as exports, everything is available at each and every corner across the globe. This means that the world has started looking alike because now no one feels the pain of being apart from his or her native place, and missing their favourite or essential items. For instance, if an Indian visits to abroad, he or she thinks about the staple food which they eat on a regular basis. But, thanks to the globalisation, which has not only started playing a major role in distribution of food items, but also in providing a wide array of materials. Additionally, for example, when someone used to visit any place far from his or country, most of the relatives tried to get something special from that terrene such as dates from Dubai which is a special sweet there. However, the scenario has been changed, now these items are available easily in the supermarkets or at other local shops like rugs and carpets, medicines are a few illustrations. Therefore, this would be virtually correct to say that this facility has brought the tremendous boom in the economy, and cross -cultural activities have started due to which harmonious relationships among the different countries have increased. As a result, the world has shrunken, and taken the shape of similar form, various goods and items of the same nature and features are ubiquitous. To summarize, while to have a product of its own kind gives the immense pleasure of possessing a unique item, due to exchange of goods among the countries, now all countries appear same in terms of buying and selling the products and services. This trend seems to be a beneficial state for all consumers as well as sellers.
Having the variety of materials of similar types from any nation of the world has become convenient. Gone those days, when a special
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to have domain on any products as a
Possible spelling mistake. 'speciality' is British English.
speciality
. This essay will contemplate on this phenomenon as an advantage.

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Globalisation
has
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changed
the way of doing trade, and this is due to increased imports
as well
as exports, everything is available at each and every corner across the globe. This means that the world has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
looking alike
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because
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
no one feels the pain of being apart from
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his or her
native place, and missing their
Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.
favourite
or essential
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items
.
For instance
, if an Indian visits to abroad, he or she
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thinks
about the staple food which they eat on a regular basis.
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But
, thanks to the
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globalisation
, which has not
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only
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started
playing a major role in distribution of food
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items
,
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but
also
in providing a wide array of materials.

Additionally
,
for example
, when someone
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used
to visit any place far from his or
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country
, most of the relatives tried to
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get
something special from that
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terrene
such as dates from Dubai which is a special sweet there.
However
, the scenario has been
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changed
,
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now
these
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items
are available
easily
in the supermarkets or at other local shops like rugs and carpets, medicines are a few illustrations.
Therefore
, this would be
virtually
correct to say that this facility has brought the tremendous boom in the economy, and cross -cultural activities have
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started
due to which harmonious relationships among the
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different
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countries
have increased.
As a result
, the world has shrunken, and taken the shape of similar form, various
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goods
and
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items
of the same nature and features are ubiquitous.

To summarize
, while to have a product of its
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own
kind gives the immense pleasure of possessing a unique
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item
, due to exchange of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
among the
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countries
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
all
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countries
appear same in terms of buying and selling the products and services. This trend seems to be a beneficial state for all consumers
as well
as sellers.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think is a positive or negative development. v. 13

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
344 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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