It has always been a desire for most of the people to become a celebrity. Because the people who are either a movie star or a sports celebrity come across more advantages than disadvantages.
To begin with, celebrities usually have a large number of followers. These followers consider these celebrities as their idols or role models. Although this seems like a privilege for a celebrity being worshipped by its fans, at the same time it is a curse. Due to such an enormous following, a celebrity's life does not remain private. They are not only followed by their fans, but also the media. Any private business of these celebrities is made public instantly through gossips on the media. This often leads some celebrities to depression and mental distress to a level that they commit suicide.
However, there are celebrities who handle their followers and the media effectively. Which enables them to not only influence the masses, but also make large amounts of money. Having a huge number of followers allows these celebrities to leave a positive effect on the society. For example, UN appoints a celebrity as its ambassador for promoting awareness on different global issues such as children and women's rights. Similarly, different companies who manufacture consumer products often found signing expensive contracts with a film star or a sports personality for the promotion of their products. This allows them to convert those celebrity's following into their customer and maximise their profits.
In conclusion, a celebrity has the advantage to leave a positive impact on the society along with making a considerable amount of wealth at the expense of celebrity's own personal life.
It has always been a desire for most of the
people
to become a
celebrity
.
Because
the
people
who are either a movie star or a sports
celebrity
come
across more advantages than disadvantages.
To
begin
with,
celebrities
usually
have
a large number of
followers
. These
followers
consider these
celebrities
as their idols or role models. Although this seems like a privilege for a
celebrity
being
worshipped
by its fans, at the same time it is a curse. Due to such an enormous following, a celebrity's life does not remain private. They are not
only
followed by their fans,
but
also
the media. Any private business of these
celebrities
is made
public
instantly
through gossips on the media. This
often
leads
some
celebrities
to depression and mental distress to a level that they commit suicide.
However
, there are
celebrities
who handle their
followers
and the media
effectively
. Which enables them to not
only
influence the masses,
but
also
make
large amounts of money. Having a huge number of
followers
allows
these
celebrities
to
leave
a
positive
effect on the society.
For example
, UN appoints a
celebrity
as its ambassador for promoting awareness on
different
global issues such as children and women's rights.
Similarly
,
different
companies
who manufacture consumer products
often
found signing expensive contracts with a film star or a sports personality for the promotion of their products. This
allows
them to convert
those celebrity
's following into their customer and
maximise
their profits.
In conclusion
, a
celebrity
has the advantage to
leave
a
positive
impact on the society along with making a considerable amount of wealth at the expense of celebrity's
own
personal life.
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15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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