Being famous is one of the biggest dreams of people in the world, unfortunately not everyone can have the popularity of a movie star or a professional athlete. Some people think than being famous can have an ample range of benefit like bigger incomes and public relationships while others believe that you cannot have a private life. I certainly think than being a celebrity has much more benefits than downsides. In this essay I will give some examples.
Once you become famous, it is inherently known that you loss your privacy, famous are basically followed up by paparazzi, fans and journalist everywhere and they have to learn how to deal with it. Although these are the drawbacks, definitely they are the essence of all the advantages. For example, everyone knows that Michael Jackson liked kids and because of this fact, his popularity increased, so he was more prone to be invited to public events and earn more money.
However, the more popular you are, the more are the chances that you can have to perform around the world and meet up people who can help you to boost your career as an artist or athlete. For instance, Shakira was helped in Colombia by a politician who was her boyfriend to participate in multiple International events. This made her really popular and after that she was the main musician of the Olympic games. At that time, I thought she did not care about showing her relationship with her fans.
To summarize, the advantages of being popular outweigh the drawbacks. Incomes and experiences performing around the world are worth it enough to accept the downsides like the loss of privacy.
Being
famous
is one of the biggest dreams of
people
in the world, unfortunately not everyone can have the popularity of a movie star or a professional athlete.
Some
people
think
than being
famous
can have an ample range of benefit like bigger incomes and public relationships while others believe that you cannot have a private life. I
certainly
think
than being a celebrity has much more benefits than downsides. In this essay I will give
some
examples.
Once you become
famous
, it is
inherently
known that you
loss
your privacy,
famous
are
basically
followed up by paparazzi, fans and journalist
everywhere and
they
have to
learn how to deal with it. Although these are the drawbacks, definitely they are the essence of all the advantages.
For example
, everyone knows that Michael Jackson liked kids and
because of this
fact, his popularity increased,
so
he was more prone to
be invited
to public
events
and earn more money.
However
, the more popular you are, the more are the chances that you can
have to
perform around the world and
meet
up
people
who can
help
you to boost your career as an artist or athlete.
For instance
, Shakira was
helped
in Colombia by a politician who was her boyfriend to participate in multiple International
events
. This made her
really
popular and after that she was the main musician of the
Olympic games
. At that time, I
thought
she did not care about showing her relationship with her fans.
To summarize
, the advantages of being popular outweigh the drawbacks. Incomes and experiences performing around the world are worth it
enough
to accept the downsides like the loss of privacy.
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