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Awards and prizes are given for excellence in various fields. Do these awards and prizes serve a useful purpose? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. v.1

Awards and prizes are given for excellence in various fields. Do these awards and prizes serve a useful purpose? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. v. 1
Introduction of statement, Nowadays, it has been observed that traffic congestion is a big problem all over the world. Either authorities should build the best network facility of public shipment or build the road for vehicles owning population. A lion’s share of people favour in it, however rest go averse it. I agree with the central idea, the government should improve the public transport system. The following paragraph would highlight my perspectives along with an apt example. To begin with, there are a number of factors in favour of my view, but the most important is that in metropolitan cities public transportation is the key factor of mass transit. It is one of the part of master planning when the city’s come under consideration. Mass transportation such as metro and bus helps the government to reduce the count of plying vehicle on the road as a consequence the street has become gridlock free. For instance, Australia has maximum metro trains and buses in the world that not only provide the real-time service at each and every stop to their citizen but also provide the Internet facility in the public shipping. It might attract the people to use the public transportation maximum. Hence, traffic snarls improve in the city. On the contrary, I also have to embrace the existence of private vehicles. Expanding the roads would ease the traffic, but emission of toxic gases of the vehicle causes global warming as a result issue of pollution is proliferating since the past few decades. In conclusion, I would like to infer that improvement in the public transport is more beneficial for making the environment eco-friendly as I outlined above.
Introduction of statement, Nowadays, it has
been observed
that traffic congestion is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
problem all over the world. Either authorities should build the best network facility of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
shipment or build the road for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vehicles
owning population. A lion’s share of
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people
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favour
in it,
however
rest go averse it. I
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agree
with the central
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idea
, the
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government
should
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improve
the
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public
transport system. The following paragraph would highlight my perspectives along with an apt example.

To
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begin
with, there are a number of factors in
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favour
of my view,
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but
the most
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important
is that in metropolitan cities
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
transportation is the key factor of mass transit. It is one of the part of master planning when the city’s
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
under consideration. Mass transportation such as metro and bus
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helps
the
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government
to
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reduce
the count of plying
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vehicle
on the road as a consequence the street has become gridlock free.
For instance
, Australia has maximum metro trains and buses in the world that not
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only
provide the real-time service at each and every
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
to their citizen
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but


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also
provide the Internet facility in the
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public
shipping. It might attract the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the
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public
transportation maximum.
Hence
, traffic snarls
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improve
in the city.
On the contrary
, I
also
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have to
embrace the existence of private
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vehicles
. Expanding the roads would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ease
the traffic,
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but
emission of toxic gases of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vehicle
causes global warming
as a result
issue of pollution is proliferating since the past few decades.

In conclusion
, I would like to infer that improvement in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
transport is more beneficial for making the environment eco-friendly as I outlined above.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
Change your language and you change your thoughts.
Karl Albrecht

IELTS essay Awards and prizes are given for excellence in various fields. Do these awards and prizes serve a useful purpose? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
277 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
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