Freshwater has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What causes of the increased demand, and what measures can governments and individuals take to respond to thi v.1
Freshwater has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What causes of the increased demand, and what measures can governments and individuals take to respond to thi v. 1
Nowadays, many teenagers expect to get a year for travelling before working or studying at a university. The reason for their demands is to make them see a wider range of opportunities and choices and I also agree with them.
On the one hand, teens will gain a lot of knowledge by travelling. The different cultures of many countries can be seen if they have enough time for vacations. Moreover, taking a trip can reduce our stress and feel energized for the next step. Meanwhile, students can visit to their native town and reunite with their family. Beside travelling, young learners can also have a chance to prepare well for further education in a year. Likewise, adults can save money by doing a part-time job which might be helpful in their professional work. For instance, I volunteered about a year as a radiographer in one of the government hospitals before I begin work.
On the other hand, taking a year for the holiday is wasting our precious time. Therefore, I also agree that there will be problems if young people are taking a year-off. For example, visiting to many places within a year can be expensive and it will be a burden for your family to pay for your expenditure. Then, you will lack motivation about your future while you are only focusing on travelling. Next, you will face difficulties to memorize your previous study after taking a long trip.
Overall, I strongly agree that youths should have a holiday before learning at college or starting their work. However, a year off is to
Nowadays,
many
teenagers
expect
to
get
a
year
for
travelling
before
working or studying at a university. The reason for their demands is to
make
them
see
a wider range of opportunities and choices and I
also
agree
with them.
On the one hand, teens will gain
a lot of
knowledge by
travelling
. The
different
cultures of
many
countries can be
seen
if they have
enough
time for vacations.
Moreover
, taking a trip can
reduce
our
stress
and feel energized for the
next
step. Meanwhile, students can visit to their native town and reunite with their family. Beside
travelling
, young learners can
also
have a chance to prepare well for
further
education in a
year
.
Likewise
, adults can save money by doing a part-time job which might be helpful in their professional work.
For instance
, I volunteered about a
year
as a radiographer in one of the
government
hospitals
before
I
begin
work.
On the other hand
, taking a
year
for the holiday is wasting our precious time.
Therefore
, I
also
agree
that there will be problems if young
people
are taking a year-off.
For example
, visiting to
many
places within a
year
can be expensive and it will be a burden for your family to pay for your expenditure. Then, you will lack motivation about your future while you are
only
focusing on
travelling
.
Next
, you will face difficulties to memorize your previous study after taking a long trip.
Overall
, I
strongly
agree
that youths should have a holiday
before
learning at college or starting their work.
However
, a
year
off is to
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