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As languages such as English, Spanish, and Mandarin become more widely spoken, there is a fear that many minority languages may die out. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages. What is your view of this practice? v.2

As languages such as English, Spanish, and Mandarin become more widely spoken, there is a fear that many minority languages may die out. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages. What is your view of this practice? v. 2
It is an obvious truth that some languages such as, English, Spanish and Mandarin are spoken by most people throughout the world, while other languages are not utilized anymore and are in danger of extinction. In related to this issue, a number of countries have decided to save other languages as long as the well known ones. This essay deals with arguments for and against this controversial subject. On the one hand, some languages like English, Spanish and so forth seem much more significant than others and nobody can deny the importance of them. As a matter of fact, people who are opposed to preserving other languages see no benefit on that and strongly believe, it is just wasting money and time. In addition, they proclaim, the society and people will not be benefited from that. So, they tend to take care of anything else except that. On the other hand, there are a huge number of merits related to keeping other languages alive that should be considered. Firstly, it is a big assistance to developing variety of cultures which is not only a perfect attitude toward different nationalities but it is also extremely magnificent. Secondly, it can be named as a crucial factor for attracting tourists who are interested in different languages. For instance, a great deal of visitors who travel to Iran annually really enjoy when they get familiar with numerous languages like Kordish, Turkish and so on so forth. So, the economy will be affected as well as culture. In conclusion, there are a lot of pros and cons for protecting expiring languages and adapt on the above_mentioned points, I tend to be in favour of saving all kinds of languages. It seems, it is going to have some perfect impact on the world which can not be neglected.
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languages
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are spoken
by most
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people
throughout the world, while
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other
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languages
are not utilized anymore and are in
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danger
of extinction. In related to this issue, a number of countries have decided to save
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other
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languages
as long as the well known ones. This essay deals with arguments for and against this controversial subject.

On the one hand,
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some
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languages
like English, Spanish and
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forth seem much more significant than others and nobody can deny the importance of them. As a matter of fact,
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people
who
are opposed
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other
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languages
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see
no benefit on that and
strongly
believe, it is
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just
wasting money and time.
In addition
, they proclaim, the society and
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people
will not
be benefited
from that.
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So
, they tend to take care of anything else except that.

On the
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hand, there are a huge number of merits related to keeping
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languages
alive that should
be considered
.
Firstly
, it is a
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assistance to developing variety of cultures which is not
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a perfect attitude toward
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different
nationalities
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but
it is
also
extremely
magnificent.
Secondly
, it can
be named
as a crucial factor for attracting tourists who
are interested
in
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different
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languages
.
For instance
, a great deal of visitors who travel to Iran
annually
really
enjoy when they
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familiar with numerous
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languages
like
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Kordish
, Turkish and
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on
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forth.
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, the economy will be
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affected
as well
as culture.

In conclusion
, there are
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a lot of
pros and cons for protecting expiring
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languages
and adapt on the
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above_mentioned
points, I tend to be in
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favour
of saving all kinds of
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languages
. It seems, it is going to have
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some
perfect impact on the world which can not
be neglected
.
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IELTS essay As languages such as English, Spanish, and Mandarin become more widely spoken, there is a fear that many minority languages may die out. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages. What is your view of this practice? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
302 words
6.0
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