Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

As computers translate quickly and acurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time? To what extend do you agree or disagree. v.1

As computers translate quickly and acurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time? v. 1
With the technology advancement, machines are capable of doing everything. It is believed that if computers can translate any language faster and with precision, then there is no use of learning a foreign language. In my opinion, I completely disagree with the fact that it is useless to have skills of international language as it helps in a healthy communication, ability to adapt to people from different nations and better job opportunities. There is a plethora of advantages of acquiring the foreign language skills. One of the major reason is that, it helps in the proper understanding of the conversation with anyone. As it is said that communication is a two-way process and it is complete only if, two people talking to each other can understand and respond to each other. For instance, computers can help in translating the words and is not able to convert them into meaningful sentences which may create confusion. Another benefit of having knowledge of the international language is that it enables an individual to adjust to the people of a different nationality. As a result, it helps in creating a strong bond with one another. For example, a student living in Germany will be able to gell-up with the locals only if he is well-versed with the German language. This will help him in building a healthy relationship with them while studying away from home. Moreover, people with fluency in more than one language have more job prospects as compared to others with limited knowledge of the language. In conclusion, according to me, despite computers becoming translators, skills of the foreign language are a boon as it helps in clear conversation, better bonding and enriching job opportunities.
With the technology advancement, machines are capable of doing everything. It
is believed
that if computers can translate any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
faster and with precision, then there is no
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of learning a foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
. In my opinion, I completely
Consider using "disagree that".
disagree with the fact that
it is useless to have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
of international
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
as it
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
helps
in a healthy communication, ability to adapt to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
from
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
nations and better job opportunities.

There is a plethora of advantages of acquiring the foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
. One of the major reason is that, it
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
helps
in the proper understanding of the conversation with anyone. As it
is said
that communication is a two-way process and it is complete
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
if, two
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
talking to each other can understand and respond to each other.
For instance
, computers can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
in translating the words and is not able to convert them into meaningful sentences which may create confusion.

Another benefit of having knowledge of the international
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
is that it enables an individual to adjust to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
of a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
nationality.
As a result
, it
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
helps
in creating a strong bond with one another.
For example
, a student living in Germany will be able to
Possible spelling mistake found.
gell-up
with the locals
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
if he is well-versed with the German
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
. This will
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
him in building a healthy relationship with them while studying away from home.
Moreover
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
with fluency in more than one
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
have more job prospects as compared to others with limited knowledge of the language.

In conclusion
, according to me, despite computers becoming translators,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
of the foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
are a boon as it
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
helps
in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
conversation, better bonding and enriching job opportunities.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay As computers translate quickly and acurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
283 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts