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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time? To what do you agree? v.1

As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time? To what do you agree? v. 1
People feel convenient to use modern technologies to communicate in foreign languages that is why it is suggested to not waste time in learning it. However, I disagree with this and believe learning foreign languages helps communication better and can be proved as a useful skill from an employability prospects. On one hand, computers have made communication more easy and convenient. People can now communicate well with people from different cultures and countries just by using mobile phones and operating any translation applications namely Google translator. Not only this, it can be carried anywhere as it is mobility in nature. However, there are times when this communication can be seen as a barrier. As technologies are machines it cannot guarantee to be running smoothly every time. For instance, battery of phone dies or any network issue may cause problems in translation. On the other hand, although it may seem that the advent of modern technologies has resulted in the betterment of human life, I still believe learning foreign languages helps people to communicate better with locals, understand their culture well. Consequently, this will bring more respect and understanding to the people, society and culture of a particular country. Additionally, knowing different language can set as a linguistic skill helping in career prospects. For example, a person working for a multi-national company in India, knowing languages such as French, English and Hindi, can easily be transferred to the other branch in Europe. To conclude, with the help of modern technologies one can easily communicate as it translates any language quickly but having linguistic capabilities is a useful resource as it aids communicating with locals efficiently and effectively while problems with technologies can result in barrier because to its uncertainty which cannot be overlooked.
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People
feel convenient to
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use
modern
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technologies
to
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communicate
in foreign
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languages
that is
why it
is suggested
to not waste time in learning it.
However
, I disagree with this and believe learning foreign
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languages
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
communication better and can
be proved
as a useful
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
from an employability prospects.

On one hand, computers have made communication more easy and convenient.
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People
can
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now
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communicate
well with
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people
from
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different
cultures and countries
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just
by using mobile phones and operating any translation applications
namely
Google translator. Not
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only
this, it can
be carried
anywhere as it is mobility in nature.
However
, there are times when this communication can be
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seen
as a barrier.
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As
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technologies
are machines it cannot guarantee to be running
smoothly
every time.
For instance
, battery of phone
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dies
or any network issue may cause problems in translation.

On the other hand
, although it may seem that the advent of modern
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technologies
has resulted in the betterment of human life, I
still
believe learning foreign
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languages
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
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people
to
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communicate
better with locals, understand their culture well.
Consequently
, this will bring more respect and understanding to the
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people
, society and culture of a particular country.
Additionally
, knowing
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different
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language
can set as a linguistic
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
helping in career prospects.
For example
, a person working for a multi-national
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company
in India, knowing
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languages
such as French, English and Hindi, can
easily
be transferred
to the other branch in Europe.

To conclude
, with the
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help
of modern
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technologies
one can
easily
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communicate
as it translates any
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language
quickly
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but
having linguistic capabilities is a useful resource as it aids communicating with locals
efficiently
and
effectively
while problems with
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technologies
can result in barrier
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because
to its uncertainty which cannot
be overlooked
.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time? To what do you agree? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
292 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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