It is widely believed that the number of senior people will solely outnumber that of the young generation worldwide in the future. From my perspective, this phenomenon will exert a negative impact and pose a serious threat to the improvement of society as a whole. This essay will first give a plausible explanation, and then talk about its impacts on the human race.
First of all, the situation in which an increase in the number of elderly citizens compared to the youth will put heavy pressure on the government budget. This is because senior generation not only retires from the labouring workforce, but also being paid for their pension annually by the governments, which reduces the finance for other aspects of life. For example, the retired community in Vietnam has received a monthly pension since 2014, exerting a reduction in the total national budget.
Furthermore, this phenomenon has been a burden for the young generation recently, due to the fact that the youth has a huge responsibility to provide financially for their families, and therefore, literally no one at home to take care of their grandparents. For instance, Japanese housewives are usually responsible for the housework and caring for their children as well as their grandparents, while their husbands are the breadwinners, and thus these women cannot pursue their own careers.
In conclusion, the phenomenon of the aging population generally has been causing some bad impacts on the development of a community, which is a financial burden for their governments and their children.
It is
widely
believed that the number of senior
people
will
solely
outnumber that of the young generation worldwide in the future. From my perspective, this phenomenon will exert a
negative
impact and pose a serious threat to the improvement of society as a whole. This essay will
first
give a plausible explanation, and then talk about its impacts on the human race.
First of all
, the situation in which an increase in the number of elderly citizens compared to the youth will put heavy pressure on the
government
budget. This is
because
senior generation not
only
retires from the
labouring
workforce,
but
also
being paid
for their pension
annually
by the
governments
, which
reduces
the finance for other aspects of life.
For example
, the retired community in Vietnam has received a monthly pension since 2014, exerting a reduction in the total national budget.
Furthermore
, this phenomenon has been a burden for the young generation recently, due to the fact that the youth has a huge responsibility to provide
financially
for their families, and
therefore
,
literally
no one at home to take care of their grandparents.
For instance
, Japanese housewives are
usually
responsible for the housework and caring for their children
as well
as their grandparents, while their husbands are the breadwinners, and
thus
these women cannot pursue their
own
careers.
In conclusion
, the phenomenon of the aging population
generally
has been causing
some
bad
impacts on the development of a community, which is a financial burden for their
governments
and their children.
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