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An international language would remove one of the main differences which separates people of different nationalities and this would lead to greater international understanding and co-operation. There should be one international language which everyone agrees to learn and speak. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1

An international language would remove one of the main differences which separates people of different nationalities and this would lead to greater international understanding and co-operation. There should be one international language which everyone agrees to learn and speak. v. 1
It has often been suggested that we should all learn to speak an international language, and both artificial and natural languages, including Esperanto, Latin and English, have been put forward at various times in history as candidates to fill this role. The arguments in favour of an international language are both ideological and practical. Firstly, it is sometimes said that linguistic diversity divides people and leads to conflict. In other words, if we removed language differences, we would find it easier to understand each other's point of view and, as a result, co-operate more easily. Secondly, it is argued that if everyone learned the same language, a great deal of time-consuming and expensive translation work would no longer be necessary, and this would be of great benefit to international trade. Finally, it is generally agreed that a common language would make international travel much easier for everyone. However, there are strong arguments against the introduction of an international language. To start with, it is often pointed out that while an international language might initially facilitate communication, some people believe all languages tend to divide into dialects, some of which cannot always be understood by all native speakers. Secondly, it is often claimed that an international language would eventually come to dominate over, and in some cases cause the disappearance of less widely-spoken languages. Furthermore, as culture and language are closely associated, it is generally believed that the threat to minority languages posed by an international one would also mean a threat to their related cultures. The result would be a dull world, lacking in both linguistic and cultural diversity. On balance, I believe that it would be undesirable to impose an international language on the world. I doubt that an international language would bring about international peace, and the disappearance of minority languages and cultures would be a sad loss.
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been suggested
that we should all learn to speak an
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international
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language
, and both artificial and natural
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languages
, including Esperanto, Latin and English, have
been put
forward at various times in history as candidates to fill this role.

The arguments in
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favour
of an
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international
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language
are both ideological and practical.
Firstly
, it is
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sometimes
said that linguistic diversity divides
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people
and leads to conflict.
In other words
, if we removed
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language
differences, we would find it easier to understand each other's point of view and,
as a result
, co-operate more
easily
.
Secondly
, it
is argued
that if everyone learned the same
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language
, a great deal of time-consuming and expensive translation work would no longer be necessary, and this would be of great benefit to
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international
trade.
Finally
, it is
generally
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agreed
that a common
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language
would
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make
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international
travel much easier for everyone.

However
, there are strong arguments against the introduction of an
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international
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language
. To
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start
with, it is
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often
pointed out that while an
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international
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language
might
initially
facilitate communication,
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some
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people
believe all
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languages
tend to divide into dialects,
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some
of which cannot always
be understood
by all native speakers.
Secondly
, it is
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often
claimed that an
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international
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would
eventually
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come
to dominate over, and in
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some
cases cause the disappearance of less
widely
-spoken
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languages
.
Furthermore
, as culture and
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language
are
closely
associated, it is
generally
believed that the threat to minority
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languages
posed by an
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international
one would
also
mean a threat to their related cultures. The result would be a dull world, lacking in both linguistic and cultural diversity.

On balance, I believe that it would be undesirable to impose an
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international
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language
on the world. I doubt that an
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international
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language
would bring about
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international
peace, and the disappearance of minority
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languages
and cultures would be a sad loss.
15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay An international language would remove one of the main differences which separates people of different nationalities and this would lead to greater international understanding and co-operation. There should be one international language which everyone agrees to learn and speak. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
310 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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