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Having different languages makes it difficult for people of different nationalities to communicate with each other. It would be better if there was only one language in the world. What are the advantage and disadvantages of everyone in the world speaking t v.1

Having different languages makes it difficult for people of different nationalities to communicate with each other. It would be better if there was only one language in the world. What are the advantage and disadvantages of everyone in the world speaking t v. 1
There is an argument that a complimentary laptop should be provided to all the children as they begin high school. This essay agrees with this statement, because in a nowadays laptop computer is a necessary tool and give students more opportunities in the teaching process. Firstly, having the proper tools in the education process gives a lot of benefits. It lets save time, so the students can focus on the key tasks. The current students have access to new technologies and they can use them. Laptops make research, writing, reading, communication, collaboration, and presentations easier. For example; pupils who want to do their homework, do not have to go to the library. They can use online books or use the school website to find every material which they need. That gives them extra time to do it more accurately and correctly. Secondly, the access to a laptop is very helpful in the syllabus. That gives opportunities to do it everything easier and more efficient. The pupils can exploit a lot of software such as classrooms to contact with different pupils or teachers, they can use excel to do necessary count and presents data. This tool gives one more benefit, as well. The schoolchildren can adopt them in special situations. Instance; in pandemic time they can continue their education process, they can study without leaving home. In conclusion, provide a free laptop for every who starts high school is essential to allow every student to develop and give the same chance for everyone to access to new technology.
There is an argument that a complimentary
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laptop
should
be provided
to all the children as they
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begin
high school. This essay
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agrees
with this statement,
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because
in a nowadays
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laptop
computer is a necessary tool and
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give
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students
more opportunities in the teaching process.

Firstly
, having the proper tools in the education process
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gives
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a lot of
benefits. It
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lets
save time,
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so
the
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students
can focus on the key tasks. The
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current
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students
have access to new
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technologies and
they can
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use
them.
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Laptops
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make
research, writing, reading, communication, collaboration, and presentations easier.
For example
; pupils who want to do their homework, do not
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have to
go to the library. They can
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use
online books or
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use
the school website to find every material which they need. That
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gives
them extra time to do it more
accurately
and
correctly
.

Secondly
, the access to a
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laptop
is
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very
helpful in the syllabus. That
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gives
opportunities to do it everything easier and more efficient. The pupils can exploit
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a lot of
software such as classrooms to contact with
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different
pupils or teachers, they can
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use
excel to do necessary count and presents data. This tool
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gives
one more benefit,
as well
. The schoolchildren can adopt them in special situations. Instance; in pandemic time they can continue their education process, they can study without leaving home.

In conclusion
, provide a free
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laptop
for every who
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starts
high school is essential to
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allow
every
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student
to develop and
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give
the same chance for everyone to access to new technology.
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IELTS essay Having different languages makes it difficult for people of different nationalities to communicate with each other. It would be better if there was only one language in the world. What are the advantage and disadvantages of everyone in the world speaking t v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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