These days, the stress rate in people working in city center have reached peak. Many says that a life in the city makes them be inevitably under by several problems in society. This essay will look into the main causes of stress increasing in the cities and propose some solutions.
One of the root causes of the stress is that people working in the city tend to work excessively. One reason might be they usually stay at work late and always come back home at night and are not able to relax or talk with their families. For instance, in Tashkent, most people sometimes work ten- or 12- hours per day, which means that they cannot manage their work-life balance. A solution for the government could be cutting extra hours and fixing strictly nine-to-five jobs. This would help reduce the stress level significantly.
Another reason is that people have stress problems might be job insecurity. It is clear that people are worrying about their work than it was used to be, because today employers and workers often sign a short-term contract and the latter do not know what could be happen at the end of the contract. As an example, in the Western world most companies have contract with employees just 1-2 years that it makes jobs more and more insecure. To address this issue, governments should bring in a law including only long-term recruitment jobs and therefore people will be less nervous about their job.
To conclude, in my view, there is no doubt that stress has an affection on more and more people by several reasons. Unlike authorities apply 8-hour job and reject short-term contracts, the stress level on people will increase considerably. An urgent action needs to be taken, otherwise the society might face even great issues than stress in the future.
These days, the
stress
rate in
people
working in city center have reached peak.
Many
says that a life in the city
makes
them be
inevitably
under by several problems in society. This essay will look into the main causes of
stress
increasing in the
cities
and propose
some
solutions.
One of the root causes of the
stress
is that
people
working in the city tend to
work
excessively
. One reason might be they
usually
stay at
work
late and always
come
back home at night and are not able to relax or talk with their families.
For instance
, in Tashkent, most
people
sometimes
work
ten- or 12- hours per day, which means that they cannot manage their work-life balance. A solution for the
government
could be cutting extra hours and fixing
strictly
nine-to-five
jobs
. This would
help
reduce
the
stress
level
significantly
.
Another reason is that
people
have
stress
problems might be
job
insecurity. It is
clear
that
people
are worrying about their
work
than it was
used
to be,
because
today
employers and workers
often
sign
a short-term
contract
and the latter do not know what could be
happen
at the
end
of the
contract
. As an example, in the Western world most
companies
have
contract
with employees
just
1-2 years that it
makes
jobs
more and more insecure. To address this issue,
governments
should bring in a law including
only
long-term recruitment
jobs
and
therefore
people
will be less nervous about their job.
To conclude
, in my view, there is no doubt that
stress
has an affection on more and more
people
by several reasons. Unlike authorities apply 8-hour
job
and reject short-term
contracts
, the
stress
level on
people
will increase
considerably
. An urgent action needs to
be taken
,
otherwise
the society might face even great issues than
stress
in the future.
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30Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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