The system that a country is regulated is an inherent part of it. However, sometimes it can be abused by corrupted people. Nonetheless, it does not mean this system is inefficient. By these systems, the government provides the welfare of the society.
Residents in a democratic society all need the protection of their rights. The essence of their rights is the existence the welfare and security service. For example, the government should provide general practitioners who look after all the health issues of a family for each family. And also the government should take the responsibility of the requirements of the old, the invalid and orphan children. It is also the obligation of the government to find jobs for certificated and well educated, but unemployed individuals of the country. At the same time, there should be the proper jobs they want. If it is not possible, a guaranteed minimum income should be defined for them to live comfortably.
In my opinion, abuse of the system which underlies the basis of country's policies must be prevented. It is a little difficult to avoid the abuse, but I believe some prevention measures can be taken. By this way, the system would be more reliable.
Minimum wage and earning by citizens in a democratic society reduce the discrimination and poverty and stable social condition would prevail. The minimum income also increases the social bonding as many people participate the social cause spontaneously.
To sum up, in spite of the fact that abuse of the system is existing, social welfare supplements and security services do their jobs to protect the citizen rights and to create a democratic society.
The
system
that a country
is regulated
is an inherent part of it.
However
,
sometimes
it can
be abused
by corrupted
people
. Nonetheless, it does not mean this
system
is inefficient. By these
systems
, the
government
provides the welfare of the society.
Residents in a democratic society all need the protection of their rights. The essence of their rights is the existence the welfare and security service.
For example
, the
government
should provide general practitioners who look
after all
the health issues of a family for each family. And
also
the
government
should take the responsibility of the requirements of the
old
, the invalid and orphan children. It is
also
the obligation of the
government
to find jobs for certificated and
well educated
,
but
unemployed individuals of the country. At the same time, there should be the proper jobs they want. If it is not possible, a guaranteed minimum income should
be defined
for them to
live
comfortably
.
In my opinion, abuse of the
system
which underlies the basis of country's policies
must
be
prevented
. It is a
little
difficult to avoid the abuse,
but
I believe
some
prevention measures can
be taken
. By this way, the
system
would be more reliable.
Minimum wage and earning by citizens in a democratic society
reduce
the discrimination and poverty and stable
social
condition would prevail. The minimum income
also
increases the
social
bonding as
many
people
participate the
social
cause
spontaneously
.
To sum up,
in spite of
the fact that abuse of the
system
is existing,
social
welfare supplements and security services do their jobs to protect the citizen rights and to create a democratic society.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes