Many people believe that completing a university degree is the only way to get a good job; others think work experience matters more. While universities prepare an individual theoretically, working after school equips a person with skills required for coping in the workplace. In my opinion, both the aforementioned arguments are true to a certain extent.
A university degree enhances an individual’s knowledge and promotes intellectual reasoning. This training makes an individual more mature and ready to face the challenges of the workplace. For example, when I was at university, most of our assignments involved critical thinking and research; this has expanded my knowledge in my field. In this modern world, most employers, especially those in sectors like finance and health insist that all applicants should have a degree. A student who starts working immediately after leaving school will not be able to obtain a professional degree and hence cannot find employment in these sectors.
On the flip side, there are several benefits to getting a job soon after leaving school. A job will give the individual valuable work experience; however, it is limited to certain occupations such as those in arts and crafts, fashion designing and cooking where creativity and skills matter more. For example, my friend, who is a chef at a famous restaurant never went to a cooking school; however, she makes delicious food because she has worked at a restaurant ever since she left school. This experience helped her polish her cooking skills.
To conclude, both university education and work experience have a role in guaranteeing a good job. Some occupations require a university degree while others do not. In my opinion, everyone should choose what is right for them. 
 Many
  people
 believe that completing a  
university
  degree
 is the  
only
 way to  
get
 a  
good
  job
; others  
think
 work  
experience
 matters more. While  
universities
 prepare an  
individual
  theoretically
, working after  
school
 equips a person with  
skills
 required for coping in the workplace. In my opinion, both the aforementioned arguments are true to a certain extent.
A  
university
  degree
 enhances an  
individual’s
 knowledge and promotes intellectual reasoning. This training  
makes
 an  
individual
 more mature and ready to face the challenges of the workplace.  
For example
, when I was at  
university
, most of our assignments involved critical thinking and research; this has expanded my knowledge in my field. In this modern world, most employers,  
especially
 those in sectors like finance and health insist that all applicants should have a  
degree
. A student who  
starts
 working immediately after leaving  
school
 will not be able to obtain a professional  
degree
 and  
hence
 cannot find employment in these sectors.
On the flip side, there are several benefits to getting a  
job
  soon
 after leaving  
school
. A  
job
 will give the  
individual
 valuable work  
experience
;  
however
, it  
is limited
 to certain occupations such as those in arts and crafts, fashion designing and cooking where creativity and  
skills
 matter more.  
For example
, my friend, who is a chef at a  
famous
 restaurant never went to a cooking  
school
;  
however
, she  
makes
 delicious food  
because
 she has worked at a restaurant ever since she  
left
  school
. This  
experience
  helped
 her polish her cooking  
skills
. 
To conclude
, both  
university
 education and work  
experience
 have a role in guaranteeing a  
good
  job
.  
Some
 occupations require a  
university
  degree
 while others do not. In my opinion, everyone should choose what is right for them. 
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