More than 70% global resources and wealth are controlled by only 7% of the population and it shows the overwhelming disparity of the resource distribution throughout the world. As a result of capitalism and improper distribution of facilities and resources, poor are becoming even poorer while rich are amassing more wealth. This causes unimaginable problems to the human and there are some steps that should be implemented immediately to reduce the discrimination of wealth distribution.
To begin with, the inequality of wealth distribution increases the delinquency. It is noticeable that the crime rate all around the world has significantly increased as the wealthier are getting more affluent and poor are suffering to support their basic needs. The overall development of a country does not depend on a tiny portion of rich people, rather it depends on an active economy and fair wealth distribution. Moreover, when the discrimination between rich and poor increases, the political situation deteriorates and a country steps into the verse of corruption and civil war.
To overcome the poverty problem the state must emphasise on quality education. Education is the single most important
More than 70% global resources and
wealth
are controlled
by
only
7% of the population and it
shows
the overwhelming disparity of the resource
distribution
throughout the world.
As a result
of capitalism and improper
distribution
of facilities and resources, poor are becoming even poorer while rich are amassing more
wealth
. This causes unimaginable problems to the human and there are
some
steps that should
be implemented
immediately to
reduce
the discrimination of
wealth
distribution.
To
begin
with, the inequality of
wealth
distribution
increases the delinquency. It is noticeable that the crime rate all around the world has
significantly
increased as the wealthier are getting more affluent and poor are suffering to support their basic needs. The
overall
development of a country does not depend on a tiny portion of rich
people
,
rather
it depends on an active economy and
fair
wealth
distribution
.
Moreover
, when the discrimination between rich and poor increases, the political situation deteriorates and a country steps into the verse of corruption and civil war.
To overcome the poverty problem the state
must
emphasise
on quality education. Education is the single most
important
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