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All education and health care should be funded by the government and free for everyone To extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion v.1

All education and health care should be funded by the government and free for everyone To extent with this opinion v. 1
In recent times, there is a stiff opposition that has commenced against the practice of the death penalty. While the majority of the society believes that such grave punishment would suppress the crime rates and the brutality. Some sections oppose such injustice meted to any individual. I do agree that capital punishment would control the society from getting into a state of lawlessness. However, I have certain hesitations in completely accepting it. On the one hand, there are stronger reasons to defend the practice of the death penalty. For example, if there were mass killings of people by some anti-nationals then definitely those have to be weeded out and to be given a death sentence. In not doing so, will send a wrong signal to the country’s citizens that their life is at stake. Furthermore, such judicial sentences were pronounced only after careful consideration by the judiciary, in regards to the magnitude of the crime. So such judicial sentences have never been given to each and every criminal. Moreover, this would sound a death knell to rest of the underworld mafias to relinquish their illegitimate activities and surrender before the justice. On the other hand, there are various voices that keep defending against the practice of sending criminals to the gallows or any capital punishment for that matter. For example, the Amnesty International says that, no one has the right to kill people in the name of the death penalty. Their death sentences should be commuted to a life sentence as every life deserves to live. Although such criminals would have committed some of the gravest crimes, they should never be killed in the name of law and justice. Because, justice should be constituted to reform the society but, not to kill the society and to turn it as anarchic. To recapitulate, we don’t have the prerogative to take someone’s life in the name of law or justice. We believe failed or delayed justice is an injustice. Likewise, killing someone in the name of justice is no different from being injustice. Therefore, in my humble opinion capital punishment should be eliminated from the human race. Don’t we live better in doing so?
In recent times, there is a stiff opposition that has commenced against the practice of the death penalty. While the majority of the
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society
believes that such grave
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punishment
would suppress the crime rates and the brutality.
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Some
sections oppose such injustice meted to any individual. I do
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agree
that capital
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punishment
would control the
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society
from getting into a state of lawlessness.
However
, I have certain hesitations in completely accepting it.

On the one hand, there are stronger reasons to defend the practice of the death penalty.
For example
, if there were mass killings of
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people
by
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some
anti-nationals then definitely those
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have to
be weeded
out and to be
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given
a death
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sentence
. In not doing
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so
, will
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send
a
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wrong
signal to the country’s citizens that their
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life
is at stake.
Furthermore
, such judicial
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sentences
were pronounced
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only
after careful consideration by the judiciary,
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in regards to
the magnitude of the crime.
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So
such judicial
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sentences
have never been
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given
to each and every criminal.
Moreover
, this would sound a death knell to rest of the underworld mafias to relinquish their illegitimate activities and surrender
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before
the justice.

On the other hand
, there are various voices that
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keep
defending against the practice of sending criminals to the gallows or any capital
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punishment
for that matter.
For example
, the Amnesty International says that, no one has the right to kill
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people
in the
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name
of the death penalty. Their death
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should
be commuted
to a
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life
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sentence
as every
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life
deserves to
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live
. Although such criminals would have committed
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some
of the gravest crimes, they should never
be killed
in the
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name
of law and
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justice
.
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,
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justice
should
be constituted
to reform the
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society
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but
, not to kill the
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society
and to turn it as anarchic.

To recapitulate, we don’t have the prerogative to take someone’s
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life
in the
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name
of law or
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justice
. We believe failed or delayed
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justice
is an injustice.
Likewise
, killing someone in the
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name
of
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justice
is no
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different
from being injustice.
Therefore
, in my humble opinion capital
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punishment
should
be eliminated
from the human race. Don’t we
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live
better in doing
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so
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IELTS essay All education and health care should be funded by the government and free for everyone To extent with this opinion v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
362 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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