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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree? v.7

All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. v. 7
Nowadays, whether the cars burn fossil fuels should be banned or not has attracted numerous controversies and drawn the attention of the public. Some people believe that fossil fuel cars have numerous negative effects on the global environment, while others are still not in favour of the fact that electric cars should be used rather than fossil fuel vehicles. As far as I am concerned, the electric cars can keep safer and environmentally friendly for citizens because of electric circuits and battery functionality in vehicles. On the one hand, introducing an electric car can reduce environmental pollution. Firstly, I would like to highlight that electric cars are environmentally friendly. For example, electric cars produced by companies have high average and low engine noise. Moreover, the electric cars are less heavy than fossil fuels and require minimal maintenance in routine. Electric cars are non-polluted. Additionally, electric cars are faster, comfortable and rich in features compared to traditional cars. Electric cars run on electricity, so it eliminates the chemical particles in the air. Especially, it produces less noise during travel, which is common in mechanical engine cars. Although many developed countries have begun working on electric cars, to replace old generation cars for better quality and enhanced features. On the other hand, toxins like co2 lead chemical poison are released into the environment in high quantity by the vehicles running on fossil fuels, which is extremely health hazardous To sum up, I am more inclined to the view that electric car technology can change the environment and people's health, even though everybody may get the benefit of advanced technology with better ecosystem.
Nowadays, whether the
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cars
burn
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fossil
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fuels
should
be banned
or not has attracted numerous controversies and drawn the attention of the public.
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Some
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people
believe that
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fossil
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fuel
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cars
have numerous
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negative
effects on the global environment, while others are
still
not in
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favour
of the fact that
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electric
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cars
should be
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used
rather
than
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fossil
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fuel
vehicles. As far as I
am concerned
, the
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electric
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cars
can
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keep
safer and
environmentally
friendly for citizens
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because
of
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electric
circuits and battery functionality in vehicles.

On the one hand, introducing an
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electric
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car
can
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reduce
environmental pollution.
Firstly
, I would like to highlight that
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electric
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cars
are
environmentally
friendly.
For example
,
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electric
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cars
produced by
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companies
have high average and low engine noise.
Moreover
, the
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electric
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cars
are less heavy than
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fossil
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fuels
and require minimal maintenance in routine.

Electric
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cars
are non-polluted.
Additionally
,
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electric
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cars
are faster, comfortable and rich in features compared to traditional
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cars
.
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Electric
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cars
run on electricity,
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so
it eliminates the chemical particles in the air.
Especially
, it produces less noise during travel, which is common in mechanical engine
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cars
. Although
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many
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developed countries
have begun working on
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electric
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cars
, to replace
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old
generation
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cars
for better quality and enhanced features.
On the other hand
, toxins like co2 lead chemical poison
are released
into the environment in high quantity by the vehicles running on
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fossil
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fuels
, which is
extremely
health hazardous

To sum up, I am more inclined to the view that
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electric
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car
technology can
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change
the environment and
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people
's health,
even though
everybody may
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get
the benefit of advanced technology with better ecosystem.
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IELTS essay All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. v. 7

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
270 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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