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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree? v.4

All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. v. 4
Electric cars are the best alternative to all cars that run on fossil fuels. I agree with this statement because electric cars are eco-friendly and also economic which I will discuss in further paragraphs. To initiate with, Electric cars are eco-friendly because these cars run on electric power which is a type of eco-friendly fuel which has no bad impact on the nature and the environment to compare with traditional cars of today which cause lot of pollution due to which many lungs related problems are increasing day by day. Also, fossil fuels are also going to extinct in future with regular use of it. For example, Capital of India is suffering badly with pollution problems and the biggest reason of it is harmful fuel cars. In addition to, Electric Cars are more economical than crude oil based cars because prices of diesel and petrol are very high as compare to electricity because of which people have to spend more money and also have to face financial crisis in their lives because of expensiveness of fuel cars due to which overall budget of their month is getting disturbed. For example, India is planning to order electric cars in future due to the economic value of these vehicles. To conclude, Electric cars are environmentally friendly and more economical due to which health related problems and financial problems of peoples getting lower due to which it will be a good option to use instead of cars based on non-renewable resources of energy.
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cars
are the best alternative to all
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cars
that run on fossil
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fuels
. I
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electric
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cars
are eco-friendly and
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Electric
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cars
are eco-friendly
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because
these
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cars
run on
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electric
power which is a type of eco-friendly
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fuel
which has no
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bad
impact on the nature and the environment to compare with traditional
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cars
of
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today
which cause
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lot of
pollution
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many
lungs related
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problems
are increasing day by day.
Also
, fossil
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are
also
going to extinct in future with regular
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use
of it.
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, Capital of India is suffering
badly
with pollution
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problems
and the biggest reason of it is harmful
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fuel
cars.

In addition
to,
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are more economical than crude oil based
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cars
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because
prices of diesel and petrol are
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very
high as compare to electricity
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people
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fuel
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cars
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due
to which
overall
budget of their month is getting disturbed.
For example
, India is planning to order
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electric
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cars
in future
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due
to the economic value of these vehicles.

To conclude
,
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Electric
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cars
are
environmentally
friendly and more economical
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due
to which health related
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problems
and financial
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problems
of peoples getting lower
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due
to which it will be a
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good
option to
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instead
of
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cars
based on non-renewable resources of energy.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS essay All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
250 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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