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Air pollution is one of the largest problems facing the world today. What are its causes and what measures can be proposed to solve this problem? v.2

It is undeniable that air pollution is one of the most pressing environmental issues that the world has to face today. This essay attempts to explore some major causes of the issue and propose some possible solutions to it. Although air pollution results from various factors, primarily responsible for it is none other than human activity. In many parts of the world, intact forests have been cleared at an astonishing rate for pasturelands and croplands, with a number of illegal logging cases for valuable hardwoods. Forests, known for its ability to massively utilize carbon dioxide and release oxygen and water vapor into the atmosphere, play an essential role in purifying the air we breathe. For this reason, their removal has done more harm than good to the air quality around the area, or even on a global scale. In addition to deforestation, another human-related leading cause of air pollution is vehicle emissions, which in fact is the predominant source of air pollution in city environments. With the rapidly expanding urbanization across the world, the motor vehicle population grows exponentially, meaning that an elevated level of pollutants is produced in the urban air on a daily basis. Fortunately, several measures can be taken to protect the global air from further contamination. An effective method to cut down on emissions in the cities is to promote the use of environmentally friendly transports. Alternatives such as public transportation and fully electric vehicles either minimize emission per vehicle or do not emit exhaust fumes, therefore will help reduce vehicle emissions significantly. Another measure pertains to how forests should be protected and managed. It will be the government's responsibility to enforce tighter regulation on deforestation as well as stricter punishment for illegal logging. In other words, forest clearance for any purpose will be restricted unless it is utterly necessary, and pushing up the penalty will discourage people from violating the laws. In conclusion, our mistreatment of our environment has greatly contributed to the cause of air pollution. However, as long as we take appropriate action with keen patience, it is possible that we can bring the air quality in our living areas back to its clean and fresh form.
It is undeniable that
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air
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pollution
is one of the most pressing environmental issues that the world
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has to
face
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today
. This essay attempts to explore
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some
major causes of the issue and propose
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some
possible solutions to it.

Although
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air
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pollution
results from various factors,
primarily
responsible for it is none other than human activity. In
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many
parts of the world, intact
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forests
have
been cleared
at an astonishing rate for
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pasturelands
and croplands, with a number of illegal logging cases for valuable hardwoods.
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Forests
, known for its ability to
massively
utilize carbon dioxide and release oxygen and water vapor into the atmosphere, play an essential role in purifying the
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air
we breathe.
For this reason
, their removal has done more harm than
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good
to the
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air
quality around the area, or even on a global scale.
In addition
to deforestation, another human-related leading cause of
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air
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pollution
is
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vehicle
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emissions
, which in fact is the predominant source of
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air
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pollution
in city environments. With the
rapidly
expanding urbanization across the world, the motor
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vehicle
population grows
exponentially
, meaning that an elevated level of pollutants
is produced
in the urban
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air
on a daily basis.

Fortunately
, several measures can
be taken
to protect the global
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air
from
further
contamination. An effective method to
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cut
down on
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emissions
in the cities is to promote the
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use
of
environmentally
friendly transports. Alternatives such as public transportation and
fully
electric
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vehicles
either minimize
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emission
per
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vehicle
or do not emit exhaust fumes,
therefore
will
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help
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reduce
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vehicle
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emissions
significantly
. Another measure pertains to how
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forests
should
be protected
and managed. It will be the
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government
's responsibility to enforce tighter regulation on deforestation
as well
as stricter punishment for illegal logging.
In other words
,
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forest
clearance for any purpose will
be restricted
unless it is
utterly
necessary, and pushing up the penalty will discourage
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people
from violating the laws.

In conclusion
, our mistreatment of our environment has
greatly
contributed to the cause of
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air
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pollution
.
However
, as long as we take appropriate action with keen patience, it is possible that we can bring the
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air
quality in our living areas back to its clean and fresh form.
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IELTS essay Air pollution is one of the largest problems the world is facing today. What are some causes of air pollution and what measures can be proposed to solve this problem?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
364 words
6.0
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