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Agree or disagree' questions are the most common questions in both IELTS Academic and General Training modules. You can either answer them like a 'for and against essay', looking at both sides of the argument, or you can put forward your own personal opinion and take one side of the argument, i. e. 'agree or disagree v.1

Agree or disagree' questions are the most common questions in both IELTS Academic and General Training modules. You can either answer them like a 'for and against essay', looking at both sides of the argument, or you can put forward your own personal opinion and take one side of the argument, i. e. 'agree or disagree v. 1
I very much agree with the statement that governments are not spending their health budgets in the best possible way. If governments continue to spend such large sums of money on treating illness and disease instead of preventing these diseases, then perhaps they should rename our national health services ‘national illness services’! Governments will probably argue that it is necessary to spend a large proportion of health budgets on treating illness because the general population do not live healthy lifestyles and so become ill. They would argue that most people do not listen to health campaigns. Also, they would say it is not possible to prevent many illnesses and diseases such as flu and many types of cancer, as well as accidents and emergencies. The problem with this argument is that it is very negative because it assumes that people are stupid and refuse to lead healthy lives. However, when people have the right information, they often do the right thing – in my country than in the past. I believe that the main reason for this is government health campaigns, including very strong health warnings on the products. In my opinion, governments can do a lot to prevent not only illnesses and disease, but also accidents. Why don’t governments spend more money on installing speed cameras on roads to make people drive more slowly? That would reduce the number of accidents. To summarise, I really think that there is a lot that governments can do to prevent illness and disease to make the world a healthier place to live. In particular, rich governments can spend more money on scientific research to find the causes of new diseases such as AIDS, while governments from less well-developed countries can spend money on providing clean water for all their people. In this way, the world will have less need for expensive cures and hospitals
I
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with the statement that
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governments
are not spending their
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health
budgets in the best possible way. If
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governments
continue to
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spend
such large sums of
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money
on treating
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illness
and
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disease
instead
of preventing these
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diseases
, then perhaps they should rename our national
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health
services ‘national
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illness
services’!

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Governments
will
probably
argue that it is necessary to
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spend
a large proportion of
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health
budgets on treating
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illness
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because
the general population do not
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live
healthy lifestyles and
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so
become ill. They would argue that most
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people
do not listen to
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health
campaigns.
Also
, they would say it is not possible to
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prevent
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many
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illnesses
and
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diseases
such as flu and
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many
types of cancer,
as well
as accidents and emergencies. The problem with this argument is that it is
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very
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negative
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because
it assumes that
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people
are stupid and refuse to lead healthy
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lives
.
However
, when
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people
have the right information, they
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often
do the right thing
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–
in my
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country
than in the past. I believe that the main reason for this is
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government
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health
campaigns, including
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very
strong
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health
warnings on the products.

In my opinion,
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governments
can do a lot to
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prevent
not
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only
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illnesses
and
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disease
,
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but
also
accidents. Why don’t
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governments
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spend
more
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money
on installing speed cameras on roads to
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make
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people
drive more
slowly
? That would
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reduce
the number of accidents.

To
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summarise
, I
really
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think
that there is a lot that
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governments
can do to
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prevent
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illness
and
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disease
to
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make
the world a healthier place to
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live
.
In particular
, rich
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governments
can
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spend
more
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money
on scientific research to find the causes of new
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diseases
such as AIDS, while
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governments
from less well-
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developed countries
can
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spend
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money
on providing clean water for all their
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people
. In this way, the world will have less need for expensive cures and
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hospitals
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
40Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay Agree or disagree' questions are the most common questions in both IELTS Academic and General Training modules. You can either answer them like a 'for and against essay', looking at both sides of the argument, or you can put forward your own personal opinion and take one side of the argument, i. e. 'agree or disagree v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
311 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
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