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advertising is influencing people more and more. Is this a positive trend or a negative trend? Give your own opinion and example. v.9

advertising is influencing people more and more. Is this a positive trend or a negative trend? Give your own opinion and example. v. 9
Advertising is one of the main sources for a product to increase its sales. Some argue that they are forcing a customer to buy, even though the product is unnecessary for them. I strongly believe that product displays in any channels are impacting people in a negative way. This essay will firstly discuss the how this has a negative stand. However, they also has positive effects. In recent times, these advertisements are being made very attractively. Although the product is unnecessary for individual, these corporate strategies are pulling most of the clients to purchase them. For instance, Most of the products on different channels display a new offer on the product like discounts, one plus one offer and many more. This kind of strategies is forcing clients to buy them in more even though they are not needed. On the other side, any new product to reach for more audience, the firm needs to advertise them on all the available channels. Furthermore, this is the only chance for any organization to publicize the product effectively. For example, If a firm launches a new product into the market, for customers to know about it, the firm needs to make videos and posters and display them. This is only one factor to showcase their product to public. This will help both organization and customers. In conclusion, every business strategy will have pros and cons. When it comes to advertising a product, it has both positive and negative effects. I strongly believe that this current trend has negative impact on both people and firm.
Advertising is one of the main sources for a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
to increase its sales.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
argue that they are forcing a customer to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
,
even though
the
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product
is unnecessary for them. I
strongly
believe that
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product
displays in any channels are impacting
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
in a
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negative
way. This essay will
firstly
discuss
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the how
this has a
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negative
stand.
However
, they
also
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has
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
effects.

In recent times, these advertisements are
being made
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
attractively
. Although the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
is unnecessary for individual, these corporate strategies are pulling most of the clients to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
them.
For instance
, Most of the
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products
on
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
channels display a new offer on the
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product
like discounts, one plus one offer and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
more. This kind of strategies is forcing clients to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
them in more
even though
they are not needed.

On the other side, any new
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product
to reach for more audience, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
firm
needs to advertise them on all the available channels.
Furthermore
, this is the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
chance for any organization to publicize the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
effectively
.
For example
, If a
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firm
launches a new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
into the market, for customers to know about it, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
firm
needs to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
videos and posters and display them. This is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
one factor to showcase their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
to public. This will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
both organization and customers.

In conclusion
, every business strategy will have pros and cons. When it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
to advertising a
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product
, it has both
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positive
and
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negative
effects. I
strongly
believe that this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
trend has
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negative
impact on both
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
and
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firm
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay advertising is influencing people more and more. Is this a positive trend or a negative trend? Give your own opinion and example. v. 9

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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