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Planting trees is very important for the environment. some people says trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns, while others says housing facilities should be built instead for step to agree or disagree? v.6

Planting trees is very important for the environment. some people says trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns, while others says housing facilities should be built instead for step to agree or disagree? v. 6
In the present era, people focus more to secure their lives than protecting the environment. Some people think that, the free spaces of urban area should be planted with trees while others argue that, this space should be maintained for housing facilities. This essay will discuss why disagree with the statement. To begin with, one the major reason why the vacant areas in cities should a accommodate for planting trees that, it helps to reduce the carbon dioxide in the atmosphere and provide clean air. Nowadays, it can be seen that, almost all cities and towns are affected by air pollution due to the different human-social activities. Thus, it is good to leave some space in big towns to plant trees which purify the air. For example, nowadays, many government schemes are implemented to generate forest in cities to increase the amount of oxygen in the atmosphere. Moreover, increase number of housing facilities in cities create congestion and also noise pollution, which affects the individuals physically and mentally. Currently, most of the people who living in cities are short tempered for aggressive. The major reason for that is the noisy atmosphere and the packed lifestyle. For instance, towns are always jam-packed with vehicles and other noises and the constant life in that environment badly affects the mental and physical health of individuals. Hence, rather than building several apartments, vacant some greenery area for people to relax. To conclude, the essay discussed that the increased number of housing apartment in towns and cities are not more important than planting trees, because it supports the smooth life of humans.
In the present era,
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people
focus more to secure their
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lives
than protecting the environment.
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Some
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people
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think
that, the free spaces of urban area should
be planted
with
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trees
while others argue that, this space should
be maintained
for housing facilities. This essay will discuss why disagree with the statement.

To
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begin
with, one the major reason why the vacant areas in
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cities
should
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accommodate for planting
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trees
that, it
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helps
to
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reduce
the carbon dioxide in the atmosphere and provide clean air. Nowadays, it can be
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seen
that, almost all
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cities
and
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towns
are
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affected
by air pollution due to the
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different
human-social activities.
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, it is
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good
to
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leave
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some
space in
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big
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towns
to plant
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trees
which purify the air.
For example
, nowadays,
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many
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government
schemes
are implemented
to generate forest in
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cities
to increase the amount of oxygen in the atmosphere.

Moreover
, increase number of housing facilities in
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cities
create congestion and
also
noise pollution, which affects the individuals
physically
and mentally.
Currently
, most of the
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people
who living in
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cities
are short tempered for aggressive. The major reason for
that is
the noisy atmosphere and the packed lifestyle.
For instance
,
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towns
are always jam-packed with vehicles and other noises and the constant life in that environment
badly
affects the mental and physical health of individuals.
Hence
,
rather
than building several apartments, vacant
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some
greenery area for
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people
to relax.

To conclude
, the essay discussed that the increased number of housing apartment in
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towns
and
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cities
are not more
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important
than planting
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trees
,
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because
it supports the smooth life of humans.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Planting trees is very important for the environment. some people says trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns, while others says housing facilities should be built instead for step to agree or disagree? v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
267 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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