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advantages and disadvantages of living in an apartment and a house v.1

Recently, many people have become more concerned about whether they should live in an apartment or in a house. The question is, which is better? On the one hand, there are several reasons why living in an apartment is superior. First, they are smaller than houses, which means they tend to be much easier to look after and keep clean. This is especially helpful if you are busy working and entertaining and therefore are not interested in maintenance. Second, since they are smaller, apartments are generally much cheaper. As a result, they are a good option if you are flatting as a student, or if you are planning a place to buy as your first home. On the other hand, living in a house may be more beneficial in some situations. To start with, they are often better for families with young children who need space to run around, because they generally have an outside front or back yard. Another reason is that modern houses tend to be quieter than apartments as the latter pack more people into multiple floors in a building. Finally, in many cities, buying and living in a house is an excellent investment, and it is partly for this reason that many people aspire to buying a home as they age. In conclusion, the choice of living in either an apartment or a house totally depends on your current situation, especially your age, wealth, and whether or not you have children. Therefore,
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IELTS essay Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages with living in house compared with living in an apartment?

Essay
  American English
16 paragraphs
246 words
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