Technological advancement has become an integral part of the society. Nowadays, a proportion of the demographic population is of the opinion that, technology has made human more sociable while another section believed otherwise. This essay will discuss both views.
On the one hand, technology, has made men highly sociable in the sense that it made communication easier and faster. This is because people are able to sit in the comfort of their homes and interact with friends and families that are miles away. Also, introverts can connect easily and meet new people on different social media platforms without having to go through the stress of travel to another town or country. For example, through the use of mobile phone technology, fax, video calling and email. Thereby making socialization entirely easy among men and women.
On the other hand, some people think it made human less sociable because of its addictive nature. Most persons spend more time on their phones or other technological appliances than the time they spend conversing physically with their peers. Thereby neglecting the basic social aspect of their lives. For instance, according to the research carried out in the western region of Nigeria among the teenagers, the result showed that the larger percentage of adolescents having difficulty in forming a sustainable relationship with their age group due to the number of hours spent on their phones. As a result, human are growing to enjoying their own company rather than socialize with others.
In conclusion, it is no doubt technology has greatly influenced how sociable we have become. This essay discussed how it made man more sociable by making communication easier and faster and also the influence of the addictive nature of technology on man's social life.
Technological advancement has become an integral part of the society. Nowadays, a proportion of the demographic population is of the opinion that,
technology
has made human more
sociable
while another section believed
otherwise
. This essay will discuss both views.
On the one hand,
technology
, has made
men
highly
sociable
in the sense that it made communication easier and faster. This is
because
people
are able to sit in the comfort of their homes and interact with friends and families that are miles away.
Also
, introverts can connect
easily
and
meet
new
people
on
different
social media platforms without having to go through the
stress
of travel to another town or country.
For example
, through the
use
of mobile phone
technology
, fax, video calling and email. Thereby making socialization
entirely
easy among
men
and women.
On the other hand
,
some
people
think
it made human less
sociable
because
of its addictive nature. Most persons spend more time on their phones or other technological appliances than the time they spend conversing
physically
with their peers. Thereby neglecting the basic social aspect of their
lives
.
For instance
, according to the research carried out in the western region of Nigeria among the
teenagers
, the result
showed
that the larger percentage of adolescents having difficulty in forming a sustainable relationship with their age group due to the number of hours spent on their phones.
As a result
, human are growing to enjoying their
own
company
rather
than socialize with others.
In conclusion
, it is no doubt
technology
has
greatly
influenced how
sociable
we have become. This essay discussed how it made
man
more
sociable
by making communication easier and faster and
also
the influence of the addictive nature of
technology
on
man
's social life.
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