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A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged to social status and material possessions. Old fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? v.1

A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged to social status and material possessions. Old fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. with this opinion? v. 1
In today's world, positions in the society and worldly riches are used to measure a person's value. Making the former criteria like how honourable, trustworthy and kindhearted the person is to appear worthless. In my opinion, I agree that money is a necessity to live a good life. However, I also believe that having a good name is of Paramount importance. Societal ranks and possession are no doubt prerequisites in achieving one's life dreams and aspirations, living a good And healthy lifestyle and so on. In recent times, how far you go in life highly depends on your connection and contacts. For instance, research has shown that 90% of students in Harvard University are wealthy or from wealthy and influential homes. Therefore, having the best things in life means you you need to be influential and have monetary backup. However, "a good name they say is better than riches". A man might not have all he wants when he wants it, but his virtuous nature will definitely earn him respect from people far and around him. For instance, our forefathers were known for their bravery, diligence and so on, and not so much for how many cowries they had. Hence, these attributes should not be over looked. In conclusion, although being influential can be beneficial in today's economy, being that it makes living stress free and enjoyable and open doors to numerous opportunities, I strongly disagree that old fashioned values do not appear relevant. They are in fact, highly appreciated and must be taught to the younger generations.
In
today
's world, positions in the society and worldly riches are
used
to measure a person's value. Making the former criteria like how
honourable
, trustworthy and kindhearted the person is to appear worthless. In my opinion, I
agree
that money is a necessity to
live
a
good
life
.
However
, I
also
believe that having a
good
name is of Paramount importance.

Societal ranks and possession are no doubt prerequisites in achieving one's
life
dreams and aspirations, living a
good
And healthy lifestyle and
so
on. In recent times, how far you go in
life
highly
depends on your connection and contacts.
For instance
, research has shown that 90% of students in Harvard University are wealthy or from wealthy and influential homes.
Therefore
, having the best things in
life
means
you you
need to be influential and have monetary backup.

However
,
"
a
good
name they say is better than riches
"
. A
man
might not have all he wants when he wants it,
but
his virtuous nature will definitely earn him respect from
people
far and around him.
For instance
, our forefathers
were known
for their bravery, diligence and
so
on, and not
so
much for how
many
cowries they had.
Hence
, these attributes should not be
over looked
.

In conclusion
, although being influential can be beneficial in
today
's economy, being that it
makes
living
stress
free and enjoyable and open doors to numerous opportunities, I
strongly
disagree that
old fashioned
values do not appear relevant. They are in fact,
highly
appreciated and
must
be taught
to the younger generations.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged to social status and material possessions. Old fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. with this opinion? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
258 words
6.5
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