More and more people nowadays believe that social status and material possessions are the most important features in one person. However, they are completely wrong.
In our technological world all of us forget what are the real values we should possess. We are thinking that our life is a competition in which we have no real friend who could trust so we behave cold, losing ours kindness.
The real problem though is that losing these values is a tendency by youngsters who are using their smartphones non-stop. Because it is a technology which made the world a material one. These young people would give the exact same example to their children so it would become odd if someone is kind or trusting.
I do not think that we realise the risks of being material. Even though it sounds like a cliche, it is true: Money can not buy you happiness. Yes, you would be pleased if you have a big house with a pool, some modern cars and a huge company but where is your big family? To be a happy, loved, honoured, kind and loving person does not require material possessions and a particular social status. It requires a big heart.
In the past people were divided into groups by their social status. These on the bottom of the pyramid were living a terrible life because the only thing they possessed were some vital values.
My opinion is that we should not go back in these times. The only change which is necessary is to ensure a good life for everyone - let’s make the world a modern but a pleasant place.
More and more
people
nowadays believe that social status and
material
possessions are the most
important
features in one person.
However
, they are completely
wrong
.
In our technological world all of us forget what are the real values we should possess. We are thinking that our life is a competition in which we have no real friend who could trust
so
we behave
cold
, losing ours kindness.
The real problem though is that losing these values is a tendency by youngsters who are using their smartphones non-
stop
.
Because
it is a technology which made the world a
material
one. These young
people
would give the exact same example to their children
so
it would become odd if someone is kind or trusting.
I do not
think
that we
realise
the
risks
of being
material
.
Even though
it sounds like a
cliche
, it is true: Money can not
buy
you happiness. Yes, you would be
pleased
if you have a
big
house
with a pool,
some
modern cars and a huge
company
but
where is your
big
family? To be a happy,
loved
,
honoured
, kind and loving person does not require
material
possessions and a particular social status. It requires a
big
heart.
In the past
people
were divided
into groups by their social status. These on the bottom of the pyramid were living a terrible life
because
the
only
thing they possessed were
some
vital values.
My opinion is that we should not go back in these times. The
only
change
which is necessary is to ensure a
good
life for everyone
-
let
’s
make
the world a modern
but
a pleasant place.
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