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A person worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old fashioned values such as honour, kindness, and trust no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.2

It is argued that people are judged these days by how much money they have rather than their morals and character. This essay totally agrees with this statement. This essay will first discuss how people instantly judge others by what clothes they wear or products they own and then suggest that a lack of traditional values in celebrities demonstrates that being is good person is not held in high regard by society. People seem to hold someone in high regard if they have designer clothes, a luxury car or the latest smart phone and rarely look inside that person. This superficial attitude is common in all walks of life, whether it be how a store attendant treats you in a shop or what someone might think of you when interviewing you for a new job. I personally witness this every day; when I wear a business suit people treat me with respect and courtesy, but when I wear shorts and flip-flops at the weekend they are very surprised that I am a decent person. This is also reflected in our celebrities. Most singers, models and actors have neither talent nor moral fibre, but they are still revered because they have a high position in society and seem to have a luxury lifestyle. Miley Cyrus is a prime example; she does not write her own songs and openly confesses to taking drugs and having casual sex, yet she is still adored by people all over the world. In conclusion, being a good person is not as important as wealth, fame and where you are on the social ladder these days and this can easily be seen by how we treat those with no money and how we look up to vacuous stars.
It
is argued
that
people
are judged
these days by how much money they have

rather
than their morals and character. This essay
totally
agrees
with this

statement. This essay will
first
discuss how
people
instantly
judge others by

what clothes they wear or products they
own
and then suggest that a lack of

traditional values in celebrities demonstrates that being is
good
person is not

held in high regard by society.

People
seem to hold someone in high regard if they have designer clothes, a

luxury car or the latest
smart phone
and rarely look inside that person. This

superficial attitude is common in all walks of life, whether it be how a store

attendant treats you in a shop or what someone might
think
of you when

interviewing you for a new job. I
personally
witness this every day; when I wear

a business suit
people
treat me with respect and courtesy,
but
when I wear

shorts and flip-flops at the weekend they are
very
surprised that I am a decent

person.

This is
also
reflected in our celebrities. Most singers, models and actors have

neither talent nor moral
fibre
,
but
they are
still
revered
because
they have a

high position in society and seem to have a luxury lifestyle. Miley Cyrus is a

prime example; she does not write her
own
songs and
openly
confesses to

taking drugs and having casual sex,
yet
she is
still
adored by
people
all over

the world.

In conclusion
, being a
good
person is not as
important
as wealth, fame and

where you are on the social ladder these days and this can
easily
be
seen
by

how we treat those with no money and how we look up to vacuous stars.
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IELTS essay A person worth nowadays seem to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old fashioned values such as honour, kindness, and trust no longer seem important.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
291 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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