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A person should never take the decision alone. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? v.2

A person should never take the decision alone. v. 2
The word decision is a very important word in our life. Some people believe that taking the decision alone is a good idea while others oppose that it' s a bad idea. In my opinion, a person should never make an important decision alone because it may lead to benefit if its a minor decision or it may lead to a crisis if its a life decision. There are lots of pros and cons when we decide on small things. First, let' s talk about a small decision that is taken in everyday activity. For instance, my friend was planning for a baby shower. She was due by 15 days. She was indeed very happy about organizing it because she was feeling great that even in the pregnancy she could some her baby shower all by herself in such a condition. On the day of the baby shower, she has to go to the hospital because it was an emergency. Her baby who was supposed to be there after 15 days came before 15 days. As a result, she was happy and sad because though her decision of planning was wrong he bundle of joy came soon. There are many decision that may lead to a loss of projects in many international companies. For example, a project leader was planning to start a new project. he spoke to senior project leader. he advised him not to start the project because there was much money it cost a lot of money and also he warned him if the project loses there will be a loss to the company. His friend ignores his word and he started his new project. New project had many new freshers. There were training and a handheld meeting was held. But unfortunately, there were many free-riders within the new project. the free riders were none other than the experienced staff who had the knowledge of the project. they didn' t contribute well with the staff. When the project deadline was near and the and was executed there was a big loss. The blame came on the freshers because they didn' t contribute well. He realized that the decision he made was wrong which led to a crisis in the company. Decision taking is good but I strongly believe that if we take and listen to pieces of advice given by peers or friends or family member it will be a good decision.
The word
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decision
is a
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important
word in our life.
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people
believe that taking the
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decision
alone is a
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good
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idea
while others oppose that
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bad
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idea
. In my opinion, a person should never
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make
an
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important
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decision
alone
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because
it may lead to benefit if
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its
a minor
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or it may lead to a crisis if
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a life decision.

There are lots of pros and cons when we decide on
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small
things.
First
,
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small
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decision
that
is taken
in everyday activity.
For instance
, my friend was planning for a baby shower. She was due by 15 days. She was
indeed
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very
happy about organizing it
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because
she was feeling great that even in the pregnancy she could
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some her baby
shower all by herself in such a condition. On the day of the baby shower, she
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has to
go to the hospital
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because
it was an emergency. Her baby who
was supposed
to be there after 15 days came
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before
15 days.
As a result
, she was happy and sad
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because
though her
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decision
of planning was
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wrong
he
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bundle
of joy came
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soon
.

There are
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many
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decision
that may lead to a loss of
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projects
in
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many
international
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companies
.
For example
, a
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project
leader was planning to
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start
a
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new
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project
.
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he
spoke to senior
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project
leader.
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he
advised him not to
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start
the
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project
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because
there was much money it cost
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a lot of
money and
also
he warned him if the
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project
loses there will be a loss to the
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company
. His friend
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ignores
his
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word and
he
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started
his
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new
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project
.
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New
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project
had
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many
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new
freshers. There were training and a handheld meeting
was held
.
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But
unfortunately, there were
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many
free-riders within the
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new
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project
.
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the
free riders were none other than the experienced staff who had the knowledge of the
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project
.
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they
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didn&
#039; t contribute well with the staff. When the
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project
deadline was near and the and
was executed
there was a
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big
loss. The blame came on the freshers
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because
they
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didn&
#039; t contribute well. He realized that the
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decision
he made was
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wrong
which led to a crisis in the
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company
.

Decision taking is
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good
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but
I
strongly
believe that if we take and listen to pieces of advice
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given
by peers or friends or family member it will be a
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good
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decision
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
25Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Mistakes

IELTS essay A person should never take the decision alone. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
405 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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