With the new inventions and discoveries such as fire and electricity, made the life of humans easier and now it
is difficult to survive without them. I strongly agree with this notion.
To begin with, there are several benefits with the new inventions and discoveries in science which has made human
life much easier. First of all, fire was the first form of energy that humans discovered. Needless to say, humans
learnt to survive in colder climates with the discovery of fire as keeping themselves warm was practical now. Furthermore,
after survival, humans could focus on development in other spheres of life. Using fire for other purposes, ultimately
led to the discovery of machines. Therefore, this discovery revolutionised the life of people. For instance, different
machines increased the production of industries such as food and textile which are the basic necessity of public.
Similarly, with the introduction of electricity in humans life, salutary of lifestyle was witnessed. Electricity
is the basic modern form of energy without which life may come to a stop. Moreover, it is the primary source of
power for any appliance in home. Also, electricity has improved the efficiencies of machineries resulting in a
higher production in industries and generating huge revenues. It can be proved from the fact that countries which are
facing electricity shortages have a decrease in growth of GDP. For example, electricity shortages incurred heavy
losses on industries, thus reducing their production. As well as, investors have stopped further investment in Pakistan
putting strain on its economy.
In conclusion, the development in the fields of science has raised the standard of humans life and it might be difficult
to survive in this time without these basic facilities
With the new inventions and
discoveries
such as
fire
and
electricity
, made the
life
of
humans
easier and
now
it
is
difficult to survive without them. I
strongly
agree
with this notion.
To
begin
with, there are several benefits with the new inventions and
discoveries
in science which has made human
life
much easier.
First of all
,
fire
was the
first
form of energy that
humans
discovered. Needless to say,
humans
learnt
to survive in colder climates with the
discovery
of
fire
as keeping themselves warm was practical
now
.
Furthermore
,
after survival,
humans
could focus on development in other spheres of
life
. Using
fire
for other purposes,
ultimately
led
to the
discovery
of machines.
Therefore
, this
discovery
revolutionised
the
life
of
people
.
For instance
,
different
machines
increased the production of industries such as food and textile which are the basic necessity of public.
Similarly
, with the introduction of
electricity
in
humans
life
, salutary of lifestyle
was witnessed
. Electricity
is
the basic modern form of energy without which
life
may
come
to a
stop
.
Moreover
, it is the primary source of
power
for any appliance in home.
Also
,
electricity
has
improved
the efficiencies of
machineries
resulting in a
higher
production in industries and generating huge revenues. It can
be proved
from the fact that countries which
are
facing
electricity
shortages have a decrease in growth of GDP.
For example
,
electricity
shortages incurred
heavy
losses
on industries,
thus
reducing their production.
As well
as, investors have
stopped
further
investment in
Pakistan
putting
strain on its economy.
In conclusion
, the development in the fields of science has raised the standard of
humans
life
and it might be difficult
to survive in this time without these basic facilities
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25Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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