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A person should never make an important decision alone. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.1

A person should never make an important decision alone. v. 1
Arrangement making is an important part of the body's soul or team leader or for them who is a deal maker for the company, project, etc. The customer never know's about the deal, which they are going to take is correct or not. If you ask I never make decisions alone because many a times whole team members take a correct decision settlement after the discussion. Decisions tanker has been always an important woman in a team, family, company, projects etc. It's never been said that decisions which are being taken are always correct for each and every body's growth because each and every body is having different, values, cultures due to which of them may possible that they don't agree with the arrangement. Arrangement makers have always been appreciated for their work and for their values and ethics. The customer who is deal maker should have the social and cultural value so that the youth is able to make the correct accord. An important deal should not be taken alone as it may be possible that after seeing the proper establishment may not be taken. For example: Suppose I am a mother of a granddaughter, she made a huge mistake in her heart by spoiling the growth of another girl, but as she is my daughter it may possibly will hide her mistake at any cost. So as per me the accord maker must be strong as straight forward the work so that able to take proper establishment without any partiality with anyone. There must me 3 to 4 arrangement makers with whom each and point to be discussed and they are able to make valuable judgment.
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part of the body's soul or team leader or for them who is a
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deal
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maker
for the
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company
, project, etc. The customer never know's about the
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deal
, which they are going to take is
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correct
or not. If you ask I never
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make
decisions alone
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because
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many
a times whole team members take a
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correct
decision settlement after the discussion.

Decisions tanker has been always an
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important
woman in a team, family,
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company
, projects etc. It's never
been said
that decisions which are
being taken
are always
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correct
for each and every body's growth
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because
each and every body is having
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different
, values, cultures due to which of them may possible that they don't
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agree
with the arrangement.

Arrangement
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makers
have always
been appreciated
for their work and for their values and ethics. The customer who is
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deal
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maker
should have the social and cultural value
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so
that the youth is able to
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make
the
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correct
accord.

An
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important
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deal
should not
be taken
alone as it may be possible that after seeing the proper establishment may not
be taken
.

For example
: Suppose I am a mother of a granddaughter, she made a huge mistake in her heart by spoiling the growth of another girl,
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but
as she is my daughter it may
possibly
will
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hide
her mistake at any cost.

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So
as per me the accord
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maker
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must
be strong as straight forward the work
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so
that able to take proper establishment without any partiality with anyone.

There
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must
me 3 to 4 arrangement
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makers
with whom each and point to be
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discussed and
they are able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
valuable judgment.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay A person should never make an important decision alone. v. 1

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
278 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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