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A new neighbour has moved in next door and has taken your main rubbish bin. Write a letter to your new neighbour requesting that they return the item. In the letter: – Explain that new bins must be sourced from the local council– Request that the person v.1

A new neighbour has moved in next door and has taken your main rubbish bin. Write a letter to your new neighbour requesting that they return the item. In the letter: – Explain that new bins must be sourced from the local council– Request that the person v. 1
Technology has played a significant role in human’s life. As a nation gradually improves on it, the old techniques and lifestyle descends. In my opinion, I somewhat disagree with the proposition, although it has benefits, but keeping them in practise is not futile. To commence with, nowadays we see every nation is in a race to improve their expertise and implementing it in almost all quotidian activities improving our way of living. For example, if we take education system in India, way back it was much an old fashioned classroom with a blackboard, which now turned into and audio visual hall using high tech gadgets for teaching. Nevertheless it has enhanced the way of learning, and often children learn it easily, which was cumbersome beforehand. But it also leads students to rely onto particular medium, annihilating their ability to visualise and focus on understanding the text. Apparently sticking to the old pattern and not implementing the latest techniques of learning also retracts them from the modern world, so infusing both could rather succumb better result. For instance, many brain development tutors help the children to solve mathematics on the basis of abacus and finger counts, churning excellent outcomes moreover kindles them to rely on it, even from a below average child. In conclusion, as we see technology is meant to succour our life, but as a natural propensity humans thrall over it, so rather inundating it, using it wisely balances resulting, so it vindicates that keeping them active, is never considered worthless but improvises the ability of functioning.
Technology has played a significant role in human’s life. As a nation
gradually
improves
on it, the
old
techniques and lifestyle descends. In my opinion, I somewhat disagree with the proposition, although it has benefits,
but
keeping them in
practise
is not futile.

To commence with, nowadays we
see
every nation is in a race to
improve
their expertise and implementing it in almost all quotidian activities improving our way of living.
For example
, if we take education system in India, way back it was much an
old fashioned
classroom with a blackboard, which
now
turned into and audio visual hall using high tech gadgets for teaching.
Nevertheless
it has enhanced the way of learning, and
often
children learn it
easily
, which was cumbersome beforehand.
But
it
also
leads students to
rely
onto particular medium, annihilating their ability to
visualise
and focus on understanding the text.

Apparently
sticking to the
old
pattern and not implementing the latest techniques of learning
also
retracts them from the modern world,
so
infusing both could
rather
succumb better result.
For instance
,
many
brain development tutors
help
the children to solve mathematics on the basis of abacus and finger counts, churning excellent outcomes
moreover
kindles them to rely on it, even from a below average child.

In conclusion
, as we
see
technology
is meant
to
succour
our life,
but
as a natural propensity humans thrall over it,
so
rather
inundating it, using it
wisely
balances resulting,
so
it vindicates that keeping them active, is never considered worthless
but
improvises the ability of functioning.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay A new neighbour has moved in next door and has taken your main rubbish bin. Write a letter to your new neighbour requesting that they return the item. In the letter: – Explain that new bins must be sourced from the local council– Request that the person v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
258 words
7
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