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You have recently moved into a new home. You are planning for a party. However, you are worried about the invoice which may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter. -Introduce yourself-invite your neighbour-describe the plan v.1

You have recently moved into a new home. You are planning for a party. However, you are worried about the invoice which may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter. -Introduce yourself-invite your neighbour-describe the plan v. 1
There are an increasing number of businesses that permit the workers to do their job from home. Such a way of working is bound to cause negative effects on companies. This essay will discuss the disadvantages of working at home. First of all, the major drawback of operating directly from the house is the loss of concentration. Surrounding themselves by other people, sometimes causes real problems for the employees, preventing them from giving their absolute best. For example, noises inside the property may lead in making serious errors while completing a project. Secondly, the feeling of not being under pressure by the time deadlines, could be a huge factor in putting less effort to complete the daily tasks. Thirdly, the absence of human interaction can be really hard for some employees, especially those who experience trouble during work time, as it would take longer to find the solution from the calls or video chats, compared to asking the help of the colleagues. Not being able to finish a given duty, might cause a lot of stress for many people. Furthermore, men and women who do their job from home usually live an unhealthy life, as they get stuck into the computer and have no physical activity. That often results in gaining weight faster compared to those working in a proper office. Occasionally a passive life is a catalyst for different kind of diseases. In conclusion, the method of working from home must not be applied by companies, because it is a source for many problems of employees, such as losing focus, lack of effort, difficulties in fulfilling daily tasks and living an unhealthy life.
There are an increasing number of businesses that permit the workers to do their job from home. Such a way of
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working
is bound
to cause
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negative
effects on
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companies
. This essay will discuss the disadvantages of
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working
at home.

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First of all
, the major drawback of operating
directly
from the
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house
is the loss of concentration. Surrounding themselves by other
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people
,
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sometimes
causes real problems for the employees, preventing them from giving their absolute best.
For example
, noises inside the property may lead in making serious errors while completing a project.
Secondly
, the feeling of not being under pressure by the time deadlines, could be a huge factor in putting less effort to complete the daily tasks.

Thirdly
, the absence of human interaction can be
really
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hard
for
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some
employees,
especially
those who experience trouble during work time, as it would take longer to find the solution from the calls or video chats, compared to asking the
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help
of the colleagues. Not being able to finish a
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given
duty, might cause
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a lot of
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stress
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people
.
Furthermore
,
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men
and women who do their job from home
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live
an unhealthy life, as they
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get
stuck into the computer and have no physical activity. That
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often
results in gaining weight faster compared to those
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working
in a proper office.
Occasionally
a passive life is a catalyst for
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different
kind of diseases.

In conclusion
, the method of
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working
from home
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must
not
be applied
by
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companies
,
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because
it is a source for
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many
problems of employees, such as losing focus, lack of effort, difficulties in fulfilling daily tasks and living an unhealthy life.
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IELTS essay You have recently moved into a new home. You are planning for a party. However, you are worried about the invoice which may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter. -Introduce yourself-invite your neighbour-describe the plan v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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