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A large number of students feel more excited about classes in which they can openly talk to the teacher, and the lectures are at a minimum. On the other hand, some students believe that a class that includes more lectures and less open discussions is a be v.2

A large number of students feel more excited about classes in which they can openly talk to the teacher, and the lectures are at a minimum. On the other hand, some students believe that a class that includes more lectures and less open discussions is a be v. 2
The time in university is one of the most important periods of our life because this time will help us to learn a lot of thinks and help us in our future career. I believe that it is better to have classes with open discussion and almost no lecture. Discussion helps students to improve various skills such as communication, public speaking, and it also helps students broaden their horizons. First, open discussion helps students to learn how to interact with their fellow students. Doubtlessly, such interaction with other people helps students to widen their mindset and learn others’ perspectives. All in all, it will enrich your personality. For instance, during my first semester of graduate study, I had attended history which includes all discussion classes. In the beginning, I thought that open discussion would not be beneficial to lean but that was not true. One day, we were talking about the Muslim tradition origin and my friend, Ali, who was born in Turkey gave us a lot of information about the Muslim custom, habits, and their different religion. This helped me incredibly to understand their mindsets. For example, I knew why they are not allowed to eat pork. As you can see, an open discussion will help you understand better other people' s points of view. Second, open discussion in class will help students to become independent thinkers and speakers. These skills are valuable for any career. For example, in the past, I was really afraid of public speaking. However, the history of my first semester was really helpful to overcome my fear of public speaking. In order to get good grades, we were forced to participate in the discussion. I overcome my anxiety and started speaking in discussion and it was easier than expected. It also helped me become an independent thinker and put my idea in front of others. This experience taught me that is better to attend classes with open discussion because it provided me abilities of public speaking which is really important for my future career. In conclusion, based on my experiences I strongly believe that open discussion and no lectures are preferable because it helps to understand other perspectives, and it provides skills of public speaking.
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and
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help
us in our future career. I believe that it is better to have
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classes
with
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open
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discussion
and almost no lecture.
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Discussion
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helps
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students
to
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improve
various
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skills
such as communication,
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public
speaking, and it
also
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helps
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students
broaden their horizons.

First
,
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open
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discussion
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helps
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students
to learn how to interact with their fellow
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students
.
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, such interaction with
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other
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people
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helps
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students
to widen their mindset and learn others’ perspectives. All in all, it will enrich your personality.
For instance
, during my
first
semester of graduate study, I had attended history which includes all
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discussion
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classes
. In the beginning, I
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thought
that
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open
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discussion
would not be beneficial to lean
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but
that was not true. One day, we were talking about the Muslim tradition origin and my friend, Ali, who
was born
in Turkey gave us
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a lot of
information about the Muslim custom, habits, and their
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different
religion. This
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helped
me
incredibly
to understand their mindsets.
For example
, I knew why they are not
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allowed
to eat pork. As you can
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see
, an
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open
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discussion
will
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help
you understand better
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other
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Second,
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open
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discussion
in
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will
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help
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students
to become independent thinkers and speakers. These
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skills
are valuable for any career.
For example
, in the past, I was
really
afraid of
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public
speaking.
However
, the history of my
first
semester was
really
helpful to overcome my fear of
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public
speaking. In order to
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get
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good
grades, we
were forced
to participate in the
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discussion
. I overcome my anxiety and
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started
speaking in
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discussion
and it was easier than
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expected
. It
also
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helped
me become an independent thinker and put my
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idea
in front of others. This experience taught me
that is
better to attend
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classes
with
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open
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discussion
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because
it provided me abilities of
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public
speaking which is
really
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important
for my future career.

In conclusion
, based on my experiences I
strongly
believe that
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open
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discussion
and no lectures are preferable
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because
it
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helps
to understand
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other
perspectives, and it provides
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skills
of
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public
speaking.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
44Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay A large number of students feel more excited about classes in which they can openly talk to the teacher, and the lectures are at a minimum. On the other hand, some students believe that a class that includes more lectures and less open discussions is a be v. 2

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4 paragraphs
371 words
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