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What is the best way to assess students through tests, projects, or class participation? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.2

What is the best way to assess students through tests, projects, or class participation? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 2
Education is necessary for everyone to live a better life. School plays an essential role in providing education to people. The main concern is how to evaluate a person’s knowledge which he/she gained from school education. Various ways can be used to evaluate knowledge such as tests, projects, and class participation. I believe that tests are the best tool to evaluate students’ knowledge for certain reasons: motivate students, keeps engaged, and self-assessment tool. First, tests are a self-assessment tool for students. Students will get an idea about: what they did wrong, what they need to focus on, and how to improve. Moreover, it also helps them to overcome their fear of exam. For example, I completed my physical therapy school form India. I used to perform poorly in my theory exam, but I used to perform well in my practical exam. It means that I used to get my self-evaluation that I understood my topic thoroughly but somehow, I am not able to represent it well in my theory paper. I took advice from my class coordinator professor. He told me that he will give one test a week and that test score will not count in my grades, so I can take that test just to explain how much I understood about that topic. He also told me that eventually, my fear of low grades will go away with this practice and the same thing happened. After three months I had an internal exam I performed well in practical and theory both exam. It illustrates that tests helped me to understand my weaknesses and how to overcome that. Second, tests keep learners engaged and focus on their goal. Tests and quizzes have always been a motivator to study harder when students know that their progress will be judged upon an exam. It sets a deadline for students to reach their desired goal. For example, my friend, Payal and I were classmates during my physical therapy school. She is a slow learner and gets distracted very easily during studies, but she was afraid of low grades in tests. That kept her focus on education. Further our anatomy professor use to take surprise tests because of that she used to attend classes regularly and engage more in classes. Thus, I definitely can say that if professors do not take tests then most the students do not pay attention in their classes. In conclusion, to make society a better place, everyone should acquire education. I strongly believe that tests are a perfect tool to evaluate a person’s knowledge. It motivates students, it keeps them engage in learning, and it bets tool for self-assessment.
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is necessary for everyone to
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live
a better life.
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plays an essential role in providing
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education
to
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people
. The main concern is how to
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evaluate
a person’s
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knowledge
which he/she gained from
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school
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education
. Various ways can be
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used
to
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evaluate
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knowledge
such as
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tests
, projects, and
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class
participation. I believe that
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tests
are the best
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tool
to
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evaluate
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students’
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knowledge
for certain reasons: motivate
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,
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engaged, and self-assessment tool.

First
,
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them to overcome their fear of exam.
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, I completed my physical therapy
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school
form India. I
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used
to perform
poorly
in my theory exam,
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but
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used
to perform well in my practical exam. It means that I
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used
to
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get
my self-evaluation that I understood my topic
thoroughly
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but
somehow, I am not able to represent it well in my theory paper. I took advice from my
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class
coordinator professor. He
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told
me that he will give one
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test
a week and that
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test
score will not count in my grades,
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test
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explain
how much I understood about that topic. He
also
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me that
eventually
, my fear of low grades will go away with this practice and the same thing happened. After three months I had an internal exam I performed well in practical and theory both exam. It illustrates that
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tests
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helped
me to understand my weaknesses and how to overcome that.

Second,
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tests
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keep
learners engaged and focus on their goal.
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Tests
and quizzes have always been a motivator to study harder when
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students
know that their progress will
be judged
upon an exam. It sets a deadline for
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students
to reach their desired goal.
For example
, my friend,
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and I were classmates during my physical therapy
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school
. She is a slow learner and
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easily
during studies,
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her focus on
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.
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regularly
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classes
.
Thus
, I definitely can say that if professors do not take
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tests
then most the
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students
do not pay attention in their classes.

In conclusion
, to
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make
society a better place, everyone should acquire
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education
. I
strongly
believe that
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tests
are a perfect
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to
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a person’s
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knowledge
. It motivates
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students
, it
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keeps
them engage in learning, and it bets
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tool
for self-assessment.
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IELTS essay What is the best way to assess students through tests, projects, or class participation? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
441 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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