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Some students prefer classes with open discussions between the professor and students and almost no lectures. Other students prefer classes with lectures and almost no discussions. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your an v.2

Some students prefer classes with open discussions between the professor and students and almost no lectures. Other students prefer classes with lectures and almost no discussions. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your an v. 2
Nowadays, countries around the world are using solar energy as the source of electricity for domestic purposes and it is gaining popularity worldwide. This is because it costs less in the long run, as it is abundantly available from the sun. The main advantages are low cost of maintenance and pollution free, whereas the disadvantages are high cost of installation and not suited for regions with least amount of sunlight. To begin with, Solar power plants produce electricity from the sun rays which is a free source of energy. This means that it is stored and available to use without any charges being paid. For instance, many independent houses in Germany save 37% on their energy bills by having solar plants on the roof of their houses. Additionally, it does not release any harmful gases or pollutants while generating power, so it also helps in the conservation of the environment. However, the cost of installing the plant on the roof top of the house is enormous, as the cost of the panels and the battery required to store and generate electricity are very high. As a result, many people are still using the conventional sources of energy. Furthermore, it cannot be installed in the regions receiving very low sunlight like the arctic region. For example, Antartica does not have many sunny days because of which the sun will not shine on the panels throughout the year and it will be difficult to use it as a primary source of energy. Solar power has its limitations and hence it is not feasible for every country. In conclusion, many households around the world are utilising solar energy for their domestic use and it is becoming an increasing trend world over. It is due to its efficiency in saving money and keeping the planet clean and green. This essay discussed both merits and demerits of solar energy.
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of electricity for domestic purposes and it is gaining popularity worldwide. This is
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less in the long run, as it is
abundantly
available from the sun. The main advantages are low
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cost
of maintenance and pollution free, whereas the disadvantages are high
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cost
of installation and not suited for regions with
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least
amount of sunlight.

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power plants produce electricity from the sun rays which is a free
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of
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. This means that it
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without any charges
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independent
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houses
in Germany save 37% on their
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energy
bills by having
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plants on the roof of their
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it
also
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in the conservation of the environment.

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, the
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of installing the plant on the roof top of the
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house
is enormous, as the
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of the panels and the battery required to store and generate electricity are
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high.
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energy
.
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in the regions receiving
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very
low sunlight like the arctic region.
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sunny days
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use
it as a primary
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energy
.
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power has its limitations and
hence
it is not feasible for every country.

In conclusion
,
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households around the world are
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for their domestic
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use
and it is becoming an increasing trend world over. It is due to its efficiency in saving money and keeping the planet clean and green. This essay discussed both merits and demerits of
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solar
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energy
.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some students prefer classes with open discussions between the professor and students and almost no lectures. Other students prefer classes with lectures and almost no discussions. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your an v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
314 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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