A gift (such as a camera, a soccer ball, or an animal) can contribute to a child’s development. What gift would you give to help a child develop? Why? v.4
A gift (such as a camera, a soccer ball, or an animal) can contribute to a child’s development. What gift would you give to help a child develop? Why? v. 4
People learn and develop throughout their entire lives. I think that in our modern world it is quite essential to be familiar with computer technology. So, if I had a chance to give a child a gift it would be a computer. I think that computers play an essential role in our lives and they bring many benefits to our society. Moreover, children can learn by use of computers. In the following paragraphs, I will give my reasons to support my answer.
First of all, by use of computers children can play many games, which help to improve children's ability to think logically, think about their next step, etc. Moreover, playing games develop many important qualities such as attention, patience, persistent, etc. Second of all, computers help children to learn more about anything by use of Internet. They can find new friends even from another country. Children will improve their communication skills, gain more knowledge and experience. Also, children have a great opportunity to learn more about other countries, their history, traditions and customs. Finally, computer skills can help a child to find his or her first job. A child can find an advertisement on the Internet about a job offer or he or she can make a resume and place it on the Internet. Personally, I think it is a great experience and a big step forward towards a future career.
In addition to those practical benefits, computer technology helps children to do their homework faster. They can type their data into the computer, easily check the grammar, correct mistakes and then print it out. Moreover, there are plenty different kinds of educational programs that can help children learn how to read, write, draw and even how to behave and speak a foreign language.
To conclude, I believe that children should learn how to use a computer because this knowledge will help them in the future to be more self-confident and enterprising. Furthermore, computers can greatly improve and simplify their lives if children know how to use them.
People
learn
and develop throughout their entire
lives
. I
think
that in our modern world it is quite essential to be familiar with computer technology.
So, if
I had a chance to give a child a gift it would be a computer. I
think
that computers play an essential role in our
lives and
they bring
many
benefits to our society.
Moreover
,
children
can
learn
by
use
of computers. In the following paragraphs, I will give my reasons to support my answer.
First of all
, by
use
of computers
children
can play
many
games, which
help
to
improve
children's ability to
think
logically
,
think
about their
next
step, etc.
Moreover
, playing games develop
many
important
qualities such as attention, patience, persistent, etc. Second of all, computers
help
children
to
learn
more about anything by
use
of Internet. They can find new friends even from another country.
Children
will
improve
their communication
skills
, gain more knowledge and experience.
Also
,
children
have a great opportunity to
learn
more about other countries, their history, traditions and customs.
Finally
, computer
skills
can
help
a child to find
his or her
first
job. A child can find an advertisement on the Internet about a job
offer or
he or she can
make
a resume and place it on the Internet.
Personally
, I
think
it is a great experience and a
big
step forward towards a future career.
In addition
to those practical benefits, computer technology
helps
children
to do their homework faster. They can type their data into the computer,
easily
check
the grammar, correct mistakes and then print it out.
Moreover
, there are
plenty
different
kinds of educational programs that can
help
children
learn
how to read, write, draw and even how to behave and speak a foreign language.
To conclude
, I believe that
children
should
learn
how to
use
a computer
because
this knowledge will
help
them in the future to be more self-confident and enterprising.
Furthermore
, computers can
greatly
improve
and simplify their
lives
if
children
know how to
use
them.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes